Kara~~ [Arrancar]

Name: Kara ((No Last Name As Of Now Sorry))

Age: 326

Visual Age: 17

Gender Male

Appearance: Neon White Hair Covering One Side Of Kara's Face, His Peircing Yellow Eye's Shine Brightly, Kara's Pale White Skin Only Just Darker Than His Hair Highlights The Brightness Of His Eyes Even More, His Lips Blue Looking Odd To Anyone Other Than Him, His Teeth Sharp And White. Kara's Long Green And Black Cloak Flaps In The Ever Growing Strenght Of The Wind. He Smiles, Wandering On.

Personality: Kara's Personality Is Closed Up And Empty, He Very Rarely Speeks To Those He Does Not Know, He Seems Kind To Those He Is Close To And Very Rarely Gets Angry. He Doesn't Have A Way With The Girls. He Seems To Half A Lot Of Reflections To Those Around Him, His Words Are Very Well Thought Out And Strung Together Almost Poeticaly. He Cares More About Some One ((Xanos)) Than Himself, He Tends To Avoid Unnecessary Fights Or Arguments. He Will Protect Xanos Even If It Means Risking His Own Life. He Doesnot Fully Love Anyone Else And His Fealings Are Hidden Yet He Wishes To Show Them Some Time. He Smiles Then Stops Often Not Knowing Why. Prehaps Happyness Is Not Something He Can Show At This Time In His Life.

History: Kara Lived A Very Sad Life As A Human, Beaten By His Family, He Never Fitted In With Any Of His "Friends" And Took No Notice Of Anyone He Did Not Know, He Very Rarely Spoke As When He Did He Was Sure To Get Some Sort Of Punishment For It. He Looks Up Too Those He Knows In A Way Others May Be Confused By And Find Shockingly Disturbing. During His Death He Lost Everything He Cared For Soon To Be Replaced By Anger And Hatred For Those Who Tormented Him In His Life As A Human ((Sounds Kinda Alien Like Sorry)). He Was Quick To Learn That The Hatred Would Consume Him Before He Had A Chance To Turn Around And Stop It. Kara Tends Not To Rember His Past Even What He Does Want To Rember Is I Blur To Him. He Tried To Get Over The Matters Of It When He Met Xanos.

RP sample: ((Kinda Up There Sorry xD))





((Kinda Hard. I Can't Think Of Anything Else To Put Sorry :[ Also. Not Talking Much. If You Know Me On Other Sites Is REALLY Hard For Me. A Little Challange Wont Hurt Me :3))

I'll direct one of the admin's to this thread, as I'm a little... well I'll just let them handle it

Cool. Thanks~ :]

It's an okay start really, but I think you could use a little more under history and a little more under appearance.

Try adding a little more, and I will gladly approve you.

Okay Cool Will Do

It Did It About An Hour After I Woke Up ^///^

Thanks

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This Any Better? O.o

Okay. So A Bit Like This (:

Name: Kira (Name Might Change)
Visual Age: 326
Age:21
Appearance: Kira's Long Black Shoulder Lenght Hair Ends In Sharp Blue Points Flowing Over His Shoulders. His Face Is Pale White In Color As He Doesn't Seem To Get Much Sunlight. He Is 5ft 7" Tall. His Shiny Red Eyes Are A Trait Of His Clan. His White Teeth Are A Sign Of How Much He Cares For Himself. Out Side Of The Village What He Wears Is Unknown
Rank: Arrancar
Information: Kira Is A Happy Person. His Past 17 Years Have Been Forgotton Due To Some Incident He Does Not Know. He Often Smiles Even In The Most Depressing Situation. Kira Makes Friends Easily, He Is Hard To Annoy. Kira Has A Sweet Tooth And An Interest For Raman. He Will Help Out Almost Anyone In Distress. Kira Will Give His Money To The Poor Often Thinking About How He May Have Been Poor. His Friendship Is The Main Fuel For His Life. He May Not Seem Normal At First Glance But Deep Down He Is. Kira Gets Strange Urges Of Bloodlust Where He Sees Himself As A Different Person And Acts Strangley. He Uses Swords During Battles. Kira Treasures What He Owns In His Life. He Retreats Into Closed Spaces When He Feals Like He Is In Harm Which Isn't Often.
Equipment: 2 Swords
Personality: Kira Is A Pshycotic Person With A Split Personalilty. His Thirst For Blood And Revenge Is Unquenchable. He
History: Kira Lived A Very Sad Life As A Human, Beaten By His Family, He Never Fitted In With Any Of His "Friends" And Took No Notice Of Anyone He Did Not Know, He Very Rarely Spoke As When He Did He Was Sure To Get Some Sort Of Punishment For It. He Looks Up Too Those He Knows In A Way Others May Be Confused By And Find Shockingly Disturbing. During His Death He Lost Everything He Cared For Soon To Be Replaced By Anger And Hatred For Those Who Tormented Him In His Life As A Human ((Sounds Kinda Alien Like Sorry)). He Was Quick To Learn That The Hatred Would Consume Him Before He Had A Chance To Turn Around And Stop It. Kara Tends Not To Rember His Past Even What He Does Want To Rember Is A Blur To Him. He Tried To Get Over The Matters Of It When He Met Xanos.
RP Sample: Kira chuckles lightly to him self at the descrution of the small moutin village he created with his sheer power, he turned to his left and looked down at Mizu his "friend" he smiled sweetly at him before with drawing his sword, the sliver moon above reflected down on Kira and Mizu, he chuckled pshycoticaly to himself moments after a large spray of shiney red blood pattered onto the soft pure white snow. Kira pulled his sword from Mizu's kneck, the lifeless body fell to the floor gracefuly. Kira walked on into the darkness, beside the body lay a tag with Mizu's name on it.

Plz follow the template provided, and as it is right now its a bit..cluttered, and hard to read. Spacing is key.

I Did That The First Time, And If You Look There ARE Spaces!! I Got Visual Age And Age Mixed Up! So Stop Being Cocks And Let Us RP!

Yes, because insulting an admin will get you so far >_> sarcasm by the way.

Approved.

^^ Thankyou~~~