Hoi-runokogiri

Name: Hoi-runokogiri (wheel saw)

Manisfestation: A beautiful blond female, she stands at a nice 5'9. She wears a bright green kimono with tiny yellow flowers. Her huge breasts have a box of cigarettes shoved between them. She is winking and a nice katana lay at her side. She has a cigarette in her mouth and the smoke coming from the cigarette has huge red flowing eyes and a wicked smile. The Girl is leans forward a bit and has a ruby necklace on. The tips of her hair are black.

Family: Smoke

General Abilities: The shikai can only be activated when he has a cigarette in his mouth, it does not have to be lit either. He carries around two weapons actually. One is a really sturdy and nearly indestructable katana. It is call Kemuri(smoke). The katana basically is awakend by the cigarettes, The zan feeds on smoke yet it produces smoke, thusly the longer that battle goes on for the stronger the zan attacks and defense get. IF the battle however goes on to long, the zan will crack and send out a large burst of smoke. The current battle length limit is 100 posts before he has to seal it and then wait 20 posts to use it again.

Sealed Form
Description: The Zanpaktou is a glittering katana. The standard meter wide blade and the five inch hilt. Its a pretty sturdy and straight edged blade. Its pretty strong noted by the Ginki(npc) the 17th seated officer that the blade could have cut the forest to pieces if Nedez where to fight there. That is an exageration however. It is worn on his right because he is a lefty. The blade shows the reflection of the Moon at night and glows at night.

Shikai Form
Hoi-runokogiri Kemuri (Wheel Saw Smoke)

Release Command: Hoi-runokogiri Puff Puff

Description: The cigarette glows and extends into a pipe. The pipe is a snake in disighn. It has red eyes on it. It produces a endless wave of smoke from the tip. The smoke levels increase to greater length if Nedez chooses to spend the Reaitsu on it. The smoke trickles down his left arm and surround the blade. Only the blade, not the hilt or arm, can be seen.

Abilities: The Shikai form allows for a small increase in speed and reflexes. He can travel anywhere in the Smoke that his pipe produces. This Basically Allows him to extend his arm length through the power of illusion. However this is the smoke in a condense form moving the blade. However the Smoke can transform into tiny needles that can be shot out when he swings his blade.

Bankai form
Buro-kun Hoi-runokogiri Kemuri (Broken Wheel Saw Smoke)
*retains all earlier ablitys*

Description: The Pipe darkens and the smoke funnels out drastically. The sword is now seen however and the smoke stops funneling around the arm. The sword is different because the blade shimmers brighter and the hilt has a wheel on the bottom of it. The smoke funnels around a five meter radius of Nedez. The smoke is solid now, yet not stone solid. It goes around in all directions in a cirrcular motion till the head of the smoke shifts and grows bright red eyes. It resembles a smoke snake and the snakes head lay next to Nedez Left shoulder. The snake has a evil grin and it moves without the Will of Nedez. Noted by Poji, the old 8th captain, that beast will attack on its own, no need to worry about it during battle Nedez.

Ablities: The Dragon is a secondary weapon. The Wheel saw is able to fire out giant puffs of condensed and heated smoke. Able to burn certain materials. The Smoke is so dense that Air can not blow away the snakes form. The Fighting Skills, Reflexes, and Counter rate of Nedez are beyond that of excellent. He is sharper, and pays more attention to battle. Due note the snake is powerful and fast. It cant hurt Nedez and the snake is able to build up power and unleash a devastating smoke bomb. However that requires the snake to build up compressed heat in the area for five turns.

Bakufuu Kemuri (Smoke Blast): He holds his blade behind him with two hands. The blade gives a nice glowing hue and then is covered by a condensed fog. He uses a over head slash and a wave of smoke flies out at the opponent. It is dense and is filled with a special reiatsu that explodes on contact with the object. Not really and explosion but its quite devastating.The slash of energy cuts through objects. But if it hit a zan or someones elses weapon it simply repels them.[CD:5]

Ooinaru Kemuri Hei (Great Smoke Wall): Nedez Breaths inward, sucking in all the air into his lungs as possible. He puffs the Pipe once and then he leans forward and opens is mouth as smoke funnels out from the mouth nad onto the area. Then a 50 foot high wall erects infront of Nedez. The smoke is condensed of the most solid particles and reiatsu in the area. Its basically an effective sheild that he uses to a mass degree, Though it can be used at a small degree as well. The wall can form a box. he box eiher covers him or his opponent. *Bankai* [Lasts:7,CD:7]

Kemuri Hebi Odori "Fukyuu Shainingu Ryu" (Smoke Snake Dance: Immortal Shining Dragon): This Basically cause the Snake to grow in size. Details of the snakes body resemblee a dragons. The greyish smoke cloud is a dragon, or a leviathan. Its faster and stronger and it can do a pounce type of attack that cause serious poisen and damage to the enemy. Basically the Snake is stronger and faster. Its teeth are comprised of the blades fragments. *Bankai* [Lasts:10, CD: 8]

Ok first off help me create an ablity

So, my first idea was "Seven Heavenly Strings"

Which I got from here

Watch at about 3:30 seconds

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iy-ruHqOazo&feature=PlayList&p=B2543A0BEC6ED2B9&index=9

We can do away with the strings, and use the sound and wind combo for the same effect.

Futon Dance One: Howl of the Galezain - An attack that focuses the wind into seven lines that streak across the area; the lines start extremely close together, roughly a blade width apart, and spread out accordingly. At maximum, they can reach about 50 feet, with a width of about 5 feet in-between. However, the danger does not come from these lines of fierce wind, but the extremely high-pitched wail that accompanies them. The lines themselves are comparable to a downward slash of the sword in strength, however the turbulence caused by the fast rushing wind, and the high pitch wail makes the air between the lines to become like thousands of razor blades slashing at your skin. This attack is extremely fast, but it sacrifices strength for speed.[lasts 10,Cd 5]

I just copied it work for word >.>

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hmm reminds me of Sephiroth's draw Slash, but anyways

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Edits nad Bump

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added three techs like i said i would

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