Fujiyori Hayashi

Name: Fujiyori Hayashi

Manifestation:

Release Phrase: Hayashi Release

Family: Fire
(Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning, Ice/Snow, Metal, Shadow/Dark, Light/Holy, Gravity, Illusions, Poison, Plant/Nature, Neutral,Kido, Reiatsu, Void,etc)

Level: Shikai

Sealed Zanpaktou:

Shikai: A orange coloured sword with some ancient japanese word written on it going downwards

Shikai Ability 1 Talaniaer:The user Waves the sword around and then a wave of fire goes towards the opponent.
This can cause 10% damage to the enemy health [cooldown is 5 post]
Shikai Ability 2 Taryue: Sword looks like its on fire and then the user can create a barrier around the user/allies or enemy/opponent to either trap them or protecting them . The barrier will break in 5 post [cooldown 8 post]
Shikai Ability 3 Hayasji: The user Waves the sword in a downwards motion and the a Long distance slash of fire go towards the opponent if it hit the enemy the enemy will take alot of pain 20% towards there health.[cooldown 6 post]

all your techs need to be explained a bit more...maybe given names as well. You need to also give them cooldown post. Also...you need to explain how it looks when released.

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hmmm 2 one lower the time it last...and bo paralysing. Just make it so some damage, last tech add a bit more cool down compaired to how much damage it does.

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approved i guess unless another mod disapproves

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