Nejiru Jibun

Name: Nejiru Jibun

Manifestation:

Release Phrase: \"Death is upon us, whispers peak within the darkness. Sacrifice, Loyal Nejiru Jibun...\"

Family: Darkness

Level: Shikai

Sealed Zanpaktou:

Shikai:

Shikai Ability: Transforms the user into a powerful demon that has risen from the depths of hell. The armor is incredibly hard stainless steel that is coated with a thin layer of the user''s reiatsu for increased defense. The defense can withstand almost any normal attack, but if the opponent is significantly stronger than Kira, then the armor will not have as much effect. Anyone at, or near, Kira''s level cannot penetrate the armor with a simple swipe or punch (etc.), a more \"prepared\" strike must be made in order to breach it; a cero, some kind of tech, or whatever. When using shikai, he gains a 45% strength and speed boost. This demonic form basically boosts all physical attributes as well as having a couple of its own abilities. The two blades he holds are nothing special alone, just regular katana, but together, they may be used to form powerful techniques.

HeruBaundo Bakufuu (HellBound Blast) - Sort of like an espada''s cero, but different in that it is not just a pure blast of reiatsu. This attack is equal to a cero in strength if used at full power. The user stabs the short-sword into the ground, to the left of him and does the same with is katana, but to the right side of him. The katana represents the pure darkness that is withdrawn from all the hate within the user''s heart and the shortsword represents the black hellfire that is risen from the depths of hell to combine into this technique. The darkness is morphed with the user''s reiatsu to form a cero-like blast of pure darkness, while the fire weaves itself around this blast. The fire will inflict 2nd or 3rd degree burns as well as the dark reiatsu will overpower almost any light-type defense. If there is no darkness in the heart of the user, this technique cannot be used and the amount of darkness within their heart determines the base power of this technique. The only reason Kira is able to use this is because of his hard and painful past, his heart has been hardened through the years and his pain has turned into bitter hate which is the key ingredient for his darkness.
(1 post to use, 5 post cooldown)

Kaikinisshoku (Total Solar Eclipse) - This technique creates a large circular object of pure darkness which is used to block out the sun''s light entirely. As this is a dark element zanpaktou, it is stronger when used in the darkness. The user is subject to a 20% speed, reiatsu, and strength boost during this time. Light type zanpaktous are weakened by 15%. Any other dark type zanpaktous will also gain the 20% speed, reiatsu, and strength boost when this technique is used. Seeing as it will be pitch black out, the user will lose his sense of sight while this technique is active. Fire and light zanpaktou can help you to see, providing you can produce fire/light to use as a torch/light source, but this pure darkness cannot be fully penetrated by light. The user can move around freely within the darkness, seeing as it IS there element as well as their technique.
(2 posts to create, lasts 8 posts, 15 post cooldown)




(I Know I do not have Bankai yet, but I put it there just so, when I do get it, it can already be there and approved.)

Bankai:

Bankai Ability: The user is transformed into a much powerful dark demon. Once the leader of a satanic army back in the early days of the earth, this demonic soul was exiled and sealed within this zanpaktou. It may seem like he has no legs, but they are just hidden beneath his robes. This armor is extremely strong, made up of extremely refined carbon steel. This armor is not impenetrable, but a powerful strike must be at hand (cero, a tech, reiatsu-charged swipe, etc.) is needed in order to even breach its defense. The users'' reiatsu/strength/speed are subject to a 75% increase (this is not added to the bonus given in shikai, it is just upgraded so instead of a 45% bonus, it is now 75%). With these boosts, the user can now move up to a pace of about 65-100mph, but that is at maximum usage. Moving at high speeds is an advantage, but the faster you go, the more of a toll it will put on the user.

Apocalyptis - The user points must be touching/holding the opponent for 2 consecutive posts before this technique can be used. This technique is a dark illusion. The user begins to think he sees his greatest fear. For the one who is being affected, everyone will disappear and his/her darkest, deepest fear will form in front of them. This fear of theirs will torture them, destroying their mentality as well as fatiguing them greatly. When the opponent is released, his mental stability will be scrambled, he will be very fatigued/tired and physically unready to continue the battle immediately. The opponent will be in the illusion for 6 of their posts. When the technique is in effect, the opponent must describe their confrontation with their fear in their post so that the actual damage calculation can be estimated. During the illusion, Kira cannot move because he is maintaining the illusion that his opponent sees so it is entirely a mental \"game.\" Mental/Physical instability will last 6 of their posts, after the illusion has finished. The fatigue will stay the rest of the battle, seeing as you cannot recover 30% of your reiatsu while you are still in a battle. This technique will stop the opponent from using any techs/passive abilities for the next 5 posts.
(9 post cooldown)

(A side note for this tech: You cant beat this technique by saying "Oh, my character has no fears so I broke the technique and attacked you." because EVERYONE has a fear, whether you want to admit it or not. Your character''s personality can usually determine his/her fear or maybe something happened in the RP, but everyone has a fear so don''t try and find a loopole =/)

Enough with the mach speed, take that part out. Being able to travel at mach speed varies on the temperature and the surroundings you're in, and I doubt you would be able to achieve that speed, so edit that part out.

For your bankai technique, take out the absorbing reiatsu technique. And also if you look into their eyes and activate this illusion, it's basically an auto hit so devise another way to achieve this. Also take out the part of sealing releases.

I haven't even bothered to read the Bankai yet, seeing as it's not yet Available to you, however, I will allow you to keep it there so you don't have to write it up once available.

Shikai - Please state the total defensive capability this gives you. The higher this is, the lower I would like to suggest your speed and strength boost should be. Aswell as that, take note about what Amatsu has just said.

HeruBaundo Bakufuu (HellBound Blast) - What kind of Cero is this equal to? Regular, Gran Ray, Oscuras? Seeing as you've said Espada, please say a number aswell, seeing as the power difference between 8 and 7 is very significant.

Kaikinisshoku (Total Solar Eclipse) - I like it, however, I want to ask "What if the opponent has amazing control of light and is in Bankai?" - Surely this technique is somehow breakable if the opponent is considerably stronger than you?

Sorry if I seem picky, it's just the questions I asked myself while reading this. I do like the idea, so please answer my questions and i'll see to approving it ^^.

Kaikinisshoku (Total Solar Eclipse) - The attack cannot be broke because darkness is darkness, but, as you said, if the opponent is significantly stronger than I, then they could probably creat enough artificial light so that their abilities will not be lowered, but they will have to constantly use their reiatsu to maintain that light.

HeruBaundo Bakufuu (HellBound Blast) - As I will be a normal shinigami when I first start out, it will be as powerful as a normal/custom cero of any other arrancar; and maybe, if i use enough reiatsu, it could match the power of the 10th espada's cero (out of res).

And I will edit the defensive capabilities of my shikai now. The bankai, I have there, for future reference just so i wont have to post later.

Do not forget what I said either about your bankai and speed.

Don't worry Ama, I was working on that right after I posted that o.o

Ok approved...but 415mph? >_> that's still a bit too fast..yer meat will rip off yer flesh boi. Literally, along with tearing it apart for going at such high speeds. But since we're all spiritual entities, make it at LEAST 75mp in short bursts. Even Ichigo had to suffer spamming his speed once in awhile, which is why he doesn't really do it now.