Orochi-The Great Serpent-

Name:Orochi

Manifestation:A white serpent with with purple around it eyes, and a purple underside. Erected scales run down its back.

Release Phrase:It is triggered by the command "Strike." The release of his Zanpakutō comes with an extreme release of spiritual pressure.

Family:Poison

Level:Shikai

Sealed Zanpaktou:In its sealed form, it resembles a normal katana with a white hilt and a circular guard.

Shikai:In its Shikai, Orochi takes the form of a long segmented blade. Each segment is identical in length, and shape. The segments are connected by a purple colored stretchable thread, making Orochi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Jin's swordsmanship. Orochi's guard is that of a white snake head, with purple eyes. The blade looks like its the tongue of the snake. The handle is purple.

Shikai Ability:The ability of Orochi is that the weapons works like the venom of a spider bite; when an opponent is stabbed, or cut by Orochi, it severs the brain signals controlling the neural impulses for movement in the limb's of the victim, regardless of where they were struck. Unlike regular paralysis, the pain receptors and nerve endings are unaffected by the weapon, so the victim can still feel pain, even in a paralyzed limb. The poison takes time. If struck on the arm, it will start with the fingers, and work its way up. Same goes for legs. If the torso is struck then the poison will spread out evenly among it. The neck works the same way as the arms, and feet. The poison works it way up. Every two posts, the poison will spread farther, causing pain as well.

Bankai:Not yet achieved.

Bankai Ability:Not yet achieved.

Techniques:

Name:Sen'eijashu
Description:He swiftly whips his sword in different directions toward his opponent. Making it harder to evade.
Duration:Each post used it requires 1 post cool down.

Name:Dokugiri
Description:Jin cuts himself with Orochi, allowing some poison into his body. He then channels it into his lungs. It is then ejected through the mouth. When it comes in contact with the air outside the body, it instantly changes and is transformed into a mist of deadly poison. It reaches five meters all around. Jin of course in unaffected by the poison.
Duration:Each post used it requires 3 post cool down.

Name:Suzu Kiri
Description:Jin carries with him a special vile of poison, as well as an antidote. The poison is extracted from Orochi, and has a some other chemicals, Jin purposely mixed in with it as well. Jin will pour a drop into his mouth, and will swallow it. The poison will force him to burp up a huge fog of gas. Anybody that comes in contact with the gas will start to see things. To be more accurate, giant snakes, snakes crawling all over the ground, moths, and allies. If the affected opponent has a huge fear of something, that to will show. Jin rarely uses this technique, because if uses it more than three times a day, it will kill him. The gas reaches out to ten meters all around.
Duration:Each post used it requires 6 post cool down.

Your ability... I dislike what it can do in the short run... Imagine if you cut someone on the neck or Torso... the neck would become paralyzed... Give it some time as poison isn't instantaneous

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IF cut on the arm, it first starts at fingers, and every 2 posts goes up, Fingers to Wrist, to elbow, to shoulder

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Editing Shikai appearance.


Shikai:In its Shikai, Orochi transforms into an even longer 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread, making Orochi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Jin's swordsmanship. Orochi's guard and handle pretty much remains the same in its Shikai release.

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Bankai:Yamata no Orochi

Bankai Appearance:Once Jin speaks Bankai: Yamata no Orochi, his weapons disappear, and a large, heavy quantity of spiritual pressure blankets the surrounding area. From behind Jin, a ginormous eight headed white snake is produced from the spiritual pressure. It emits it's own individual, purple reiatsu upon release. The giant creature is two hundred meters in length, and is ninety meters in width. Since it is a striking position, it stands one hundred meters. The snakes are white, and their undersides are purple. Erected spike-like scales run down their backs. Around their eyes have purple markings around them. Each one has a red bib like cloth tied around their necks. Each individual snake has a number in kanji form on their cloth. The numbers are one through eight. When it is finally summoned, the snake with the number one cloth. Will regurgitate a sword, similar to his sealed one. The only difference is the guard has a snake biting its tail engraved into it. The sword lands on Jin's left side, where he grabs the handle with his right hand, and unsheathes it.

Bankai Special Ability:The creature breathes a poisonous derivative of Jin's blood which is lethal to anyone who breathes it, aside from Jin. The poison spreads out ten meters all around, making it avoidable. Yamata no Orochi poison is very potent, as it can begin to break down the body immediately after contact. Even his tracks are deadly. Jin can change the composition of the poison as well, ensuring that no foolproof antidote can ever be manufactured to cure it, and no immunity is developed against it. The poison have symptoms. First starting out is red burning rashes. Then blurry, wobbly vision, and finally paralysis. When sealing, even the fog seals back up.

• Retractable Blades:Yamata no Orochi can produce numerous blades,(though they mostly use a single large sword), which can extend from their mouths, allowing it to run through and skewer opponents. This, used simultaneously with its poison makes Yamata no Orochi particularly lethal to anyone that cannot keep a safe distance, which is also difficult due to its immense size. Instead of the blades, it can also devour an opponent after it charges into them, killing them.
  
  
• Regeneration:If one of the heads is severed, it will regenerate its lost head, growing it back. The only way to completely stop the regeneration would be to sever all the heads, kill, or defeat Jin. Of course this is a feat in its self, for one would have to be strong as, or stronger that Jin.
  
  
• Acidic Saliva:Yamata no Orochi's saliva can melt just about anything. He can also regurgitate a large mass of saliva, and use it as a projectile.

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Edited 2nd Tech.

Name:Dokugiri
Description:With the power of Orochi being a part of him. He starts concentrating his spiritual pressure inside his body. He then channels it into his lungs. It is then ejected through the mouth. When it comes in contact with the air outside the body, it instantly changes and is transformed into a mist of deadly poison. It reaches five meters all around. Jin of course in unaffected by the poison. When the poison makes contact, it will cause the skin to rash up, and burn. Only to the parts that came into contact will suffer the burning rashes. Overexposure will cause wobbly, and blurred vision.
Usages:3
Duration:3 posts
Cooldown:4 posts.



Edited the effect of Bankai poisoning.

Bankai Special Ability:The creature breathes a poisonous derivative of Jin's blood which is lethal to anyone who breathes it, aside from Jin. The poison spreads out ten meters all around, making it avoidable. Yamata no Orochi poison is very potent, as it can begin to break down the body immediately after contact. Even his tracks are deadly. Jin can change the composition of the poison as well, ensuring that no foolproof antidote can ever be manufactured to cure it, and no immunity is developed against it. Coming into contact with it, will cause the skin to rot, and corrupt the flesh. Making them the person die a slow, and agonizing stinky death. Picture black plague. The rotting worsens each post, by a little. And if the arm is poisoned, then it will only spread through out the arm. It wont travel to other body parts, unless they to come into contact with it. This does not effect breathing.


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Bankai Appearance:Once Jin speaks Bankai: Yamata no Orochi, Jin. and his weapon disappears, In a large burst of white light. A large, heavy quantity of spiritual pressure blankets the surrounding area. From behind where Jin was standing. A ginormous eight headed white snake is produced from the spiritual pressure. It emits it's own individual, purple reiatsu upon release. The giant creature is two hundred meters in length, and is ninety meters in width. Since it is a striking position, it stands one hundred meters. The snakes are white, and their undersides are purple. Erected spike-like scales run down their backs. Around their eyes have purple markings around them. Each one has a red bib like cloth tied around their necks. Each individual snake has a number in kanji form on their cloth. The numbers are one through eight. When it is finally summoned, the snake with the number one cloth. Will regurgitate Both Jin, and a sword, similar to his sealed one. The only difference is the guard has a snake biting its tail engraved into it. The sword lands on Jin's left side, where he grabs the handle with his right hand, and unsheathes it.

Bankai Special Ability: After Jin is regurgitated, he healed of all wounds. The creature also breathes a poisonous derivative of Jin's blood which is lethal to anyone who breathes it, aside from Jin. The poison spreads out ten meters all around, making it avoidable. Yamata no Orochi poison is very potent, as it can begin to break down the body immediately after contact. Even his tracks are deadly. Jin can change the composition of the poison as well, ensuring that no foolproof antidote can ever be manufactured to cure it, and no immunity is developed against it. Coming into contact with it, will cause the skin to rot, and corrupt the flesh. Making them the person die a slow, and agonizing stinky death. Picture black plague. The rotting worsens each post, by a little. And if the arm is poisoned, then it will only spread through out the arm. It wont travel to other body parts, unless they to come into contact with it. This does not effect breathing.

Right, I don't see a problem with this. APPROVED