Amon's Zan

Name: Kami

Manifestation: A doppelganger of me but will teal eyes.

Release Phrase: Chikara

Family: Space o.O

Level: Shikai

Sealed Zanpaktou: http://swordforum.com/swords/vietnamese/kiem.jpg

Shikai: http://www.swordsswords.com/ProductImages/s/Black_Widow_Death_Sting_Sword_Full_Tang.jpg

Shikai Ability: The sword is self dosnt need to be swung but it can cut open portals any were, the human world the Death god world ect. It can open three at a time each leading to another portal (in truth they all are one portal even if it looks like three) They can get as large as 400 feet by 400 feet.
Bankai:Not yet
Bankai Ability:Not yet

Techniques: (Must have this template for all new Tech's)

Name: Portal Blade
Effect: The Zan becomes one of the portals and what ever it cuts is sent through the portal but only the thing it touches so say it hits a building, only that little part that it 'cut' would be sent through the portal. This works with everything but Bankai.
Duration and or Cooldown: About two pages (for a one on one fight). And 20 for a more then one person fight.

Name: Life Dome
Effect: If the area I am going to through the portal happens to be a place were life can not live (like under water and such :/) I may use elements from the area around me to make it so I can live. (If under water I make a dome and bring in air (and plants and such) This will make it so I can run away for a healing and make a hide out....(I can only shape things into basic items)
Duration and or Cooldown: It takes about three post to make it so that life can live there for about three weeks. (food wise air is there becuse of the plants. But Death gods dont eat or breath :/ So...its kinda a no duh I might save a few humans...)


if these get approved I will make another one



Rules in making Techs:
1-99 posts: 3 techs
100-199: 4 techs
200-299: 5 techs
300-399: 6 techs.... and so on and so fourth... you can add more techs as your posts goes up.
NOTE: Put if the tech is used in shikai or bankai for the sake of order

Restate... Portals are confusing *Plant Shaped??* Users SP... we don't do that here, read over some other zans and get a general feel of the style

Bump~ I did edit :3

I am going to deny it, Space is not an element, nor do the techniques have anything to do with space.


So re-submit a new zan.

>.> incorrect on the it dosnt have to do with space.....I am not talking outer space I am talking area and what not.....Portals rip through space so insence it dose have to do with space......

also then what element would work for it? None?

...that shikai ability sounds far too easily god modded <.< Especially the size of the portals and the fact they "shred whatever falls into them" or what not...yeah...

That is going to be later if I get banki -.0 but from the sounds of it I just plan on staying at the level I am the portal them self at that size would almost kill me and leave me at a near disappering state.... meaning my robes would go white and I would lose the power to use any thing for a month in real time is that ok with you?


wooop! I did a shitty edit eh? I taken it out ok?

Dude that's freakin' huge though! You'll be taking out countless allies at the same time, and I don't care WHAT you're sacrificing such as "no fighting for a month in real life time" as then you'll probably just be killed anyways.

That first tech had damn well better be easily dodgeable since its not block-able and can far too easily be used to kill....plus that cool down equivalates to something like 30 or 15 post cool down (whether you're going by your posts only or yours and your opponents'). 20 pages = a fight will likely NOT go this long.

And the "Life Dome" bit...yeah...likely would have some kind of cool down like "can't use until x number of battles" because that thing is way too much to use often. And how long does it seriously last? As in say...a fight? When people are most likely to USE their zan powers? Unless you're a healer type in the fourth division in which case one can foresee using their zan outside of a fight. AND if your element is space then how the heck can you create trees or something? Now if you used nature, sure, but you use space so I can see moving air into something like a bubble but that's it.

I'm sorry but...this whole zan seems like too much to me. If another admin or mod disagrees feel free to say so.

One for the trees and such I would merely take them from the area useing one the three portals. I say a day for how long the domes can last, and the cool down wouldnt matter seeing as I then could only make one a day....

The blade is blockable with Bankai but the blade itself then will take up two of my portals (so that what I cut goes out the other) Along with it can only be used one page per battle for one on one if more two pages (seeing as the pages are in truth not that long -.-) happy?

Space is still not an element.

Dude.. You're making it too overpowered. What an admin says go's, and it's far too easily godmodded.

Denied

Make a new Zan, and stop using "Pages" and "Days" - It could take a day for somebody to reply to the post, so it won't even be active when they reply. Use "Posts" instead.

If some one post in a topic once -.- and dosnt post for a day in my eyes its not going to be like OMG I am swing my sword at you and one day later it you block it -.- fights happen in the same day so I am basicly saying once a day = one a day but not in battle

Then what's the point in having it as once per day, and not once per battle topic? The fact still stands.

Denied either way, as it's still too easily godmodable.