Okami (Arrancar)

Name: (Okami Umadi)

Race: (Arrancar)

Age: (Life as a hollow 102 years/vizard 12 years/over all 150)

Gender (Male)

Appearance: (Avatar. But eyes are white because he is blind and left arm looks like it is covered in armored bone )

Personality: (Okami is a person who does not care about anything and he just goes with the flow and does not care whatever happens to him. He wants power though and will go to almost anything to get his power. Okami doesn't dislike anything or anyone but just thinks of them as nothing. )

History: (Okami was born as a vizard and he always thought he had all the power because he was a vizard but one day his hollow self hit him very hard and started to take over his mind. Okami rejected it and was a vizard until he was 19 then his hollow came back.

This time he let the hollow in and it took over his head but when it did this he turned in to a arrancar and he felt even more power than before. Okami then joined a group of arrancars and became more powerful then he ever felt. Okami kept being a arrancar and he leaned many of there abilities and was one of the most fast arrancars. Okami also likes his sword because it is very light for him.

Okami then heard of a event that involved his parents. They died when they where just in a village and a captain killed them. After that day Okami started hunting captains and wanted to kill them all.)

Innate Ability: (Skin and organs and bones are steel that look like skin and Okami can use this so grow out other limbs or anything of that sort. He has a never ending amount of limbs he can grow but not all of them have powers. These limbs have all different abilities but he has 4 special ones on his back that let him see. but 8 of them can catch on fire. and 2 of them can drain life from the earth and give it to him )

change race from viazard to arrancar, add more to your BG and your innate ability is looking like 3 diffrent abilitys, clean it up

K how does it look now

Denied, re-write your history due to the fact that it makes little sense as to how your inner hollow turns you into an arrancar. If anything you would become a hollow nor would you retain your identity.

Along with what Rosalina-San has stated. Flesh out the entire app with detail, the history, personailty, appearance, are all far too lacking in detail and explanation. Even if you say " look at avatar" you ar still going to have to type it out IN words. Flesh out the whole thing, add some detailm, length, and creativity to it. Until this app is at the very least decent. NOT APPROVED.