Koumori

Name: Koumori

Release Phrase: "I'll show you my Pain!"

Represent: Bat

Element: Illusions

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Ultimate Ability/Attack: If they both exchange eye contact, then the enemy will appear in a illusion made world at which Yami controls. Yami can only keep them in there for 3 post. It may seem that the enemy is in the world for day, but they were really in there for seconds. . This attack does no harm to the enemy, but makes the enemy think they are harmed. The enemy well remember everything that happened as much as they remember their name. [7 post cool down.]

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Yami looks into the enemies eyes, and if they look back this will work. Yami's eyes turn black as midnight. The enemy will see them self in them. At first it will just show them standing there. Then the show beings. The enemies vision will be all on the eyes, so they see Yami's eyes really close. Like having someone right in front of you. The enemy will see them self being killed, and they will feel the pain. They won't actually be harmed when Yami does this. [5 post cool down] [Last 2 post]

Ummm, i'm going to ask you to use another picture besides ulquiorra. no canon pictures. Now then, down to bussiness. Your ultimate ability is a no no, it has to have some way to avoid it, and some way to get out of it. HE cannot keep them in there for as long as he wants, number one that is way overpowered, and number two your reiatsu is not limitless so at some point you'd run out and the power would be over. Your tech

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Yami looks into the enemies eyes, and if they look back this will work. Yami's eyes turn black as midnight. The enemy will see them self in them. At first it will just show them standing there. Then the show beings. The enemies vision will be all on the eyes, so they see Yami's eyes really close. Like having someone right in front of you. The enemy will see them self being killed, and they will feel the pain. They won't actually be harmed when Yami does this. [5 post cool down] [Last 2 post]

Reword it, that makes no sense to me. And this

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Yami can create 100 clones of himself. The clones cannot do any damage, but they will stop at nothing to try to kill the enemy. The clones disappear if they are hit once. The clones will just go through the enemy if they mange to hit them.[6 post cool down] [Last 2 post]

Also makes no sense at all, they stop at nothing to kill the target but cannot hurt them. This is DENEID Until you make it more understandable and fix it

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If they both exchange eye contact, then the enemy will appear in a illusion made world at which Yami controls.

A way to avoid it.

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The enemy will see them self being killed, and they will feel the pain.

Sums it up in that line.

Removed the 2nd Tech.

How exactly would they feel pain, just by seeing themselves being killed, illusions are not real, so, I doubt anyone would feel pain by one. But, other than that, thats no way to avoid it as everyone will make eye-contacts during a battle. There has to be something else to it, no one closes their eyes when someone is trying to kill them in a fight.

illusions cause mental pain fibi -___-

You're right, I worded that wrong, but his lack of having a good way to avoid it is annoying. After all, eye-contact is made by everyone, so it's not a vaild way in my book--thus making it auto hitting.