Shiookami Ketsutenshiken

Name: Shiookami Ketsutenshiken (Crystalite Wolf Frozen Angel Blade)

Manifestation: A mostly transparent blue crystalite wolf with white eye with no pupils

Release Phrase: Howl to the crystal moon!

Family: Earth(Crystal)


Level: Shikai

Sealed Zanpaktou:

Shikai:

Shikai Ability: Anything slashed is covered with crystal, and wielder can control all crystal, natural and zanpakuto. He does this because there is an energy in both types that he can create and power reiatsu into and move around and cause growth. By crystal I mean all things transparent and shiney, some valuable, they must also be natural or made by his zanpakuto.


Techniques:

Name: Crystal Darts
Effect: Wielder pulls crystal from the ground and points them in midair at the enemy fires the pointy crystal darts at enemy. Piercing of armor/ skin are common effects of this
Duration and or Cooldown: 1 post, 2 turn cooldown

Name: Crystal Implosion
Effect: Wielder compacts the crystal and can cause any crystal to sink inwards in spikes. He is really just changing the the crystals' shapes. Piercing of bone/ muscles, possible death, and temporary paralysis have been reported
Duration and or Cooldown: 1 turn to use, paralysis lasts 1 turns, cooldown is 5 turns

Name: Crystal Growth
Effect: Can make crystal grow larger, only if it is there or is made, used in combination with Crystal Implosion for more damage. Faster growth drain wielder faster. Limit on size is bout 5 feet from wherever there is a living or his zanpakuto's touch, wether it is his or his enemies
Duration and or Cooldown: A max of 5 turns and then he is totally drained and 2 turn cooldown for each turn it is used

Alright then, I removed it.

Added in- Do I have to have it approved?

Your shikai ability needs a better description of how you manipulate crystal and control it. For all your techniques increase the description size. Also make the cooldowns larger for each technique. There needs to be a cooldown for the last technique, also make it so there is a limit in size to the crystal. (Also Prashanth, do not post in other people's applications, please and thank you.)

Okay is itg good now?

You still need to add more description to the techniques. Also increase the cooldown of technique one. For technique number three, does the cooldown increase each time you make your crystals grow?

Yes and done.

Crystal is not an elemint change it.

also conserding what you have been saying in the Cbox about it i am reluctent to approve it seeing as its looking like you will gm with it.

So dissapproved

I couldn't possibly GM with it! I'm too go with the flow! Now quit making me necropost for points!

And the mods were taunting meh and calling my Zanpakuto weak! I need it so I can kill them.

Quote :

Duration and or Cooldown: However long it takes to drain the user unless stopped and 1 turn cooldown for each turn it is used

You didn't even say HOW long it took to drain you, and gods knows what some people try to pull of the "etneral and bountiful reiatsu" bit so no, you'd definitely have to put something down. Plus, control crystal....do do what?

You'd have to recall that both first techs are dodge able (seeing as the third is more of a passive ability that still requires a better limit)

Implosion would need a higher cool down, and I'd say bump paralysis down to one turn as well.

Lastly, try to kill people with skill, not trying to find ways to go OP in an undercover form or in obscure ways.

Also, might wanna change it to earth and have somethings "crystal" based, but you'd have to describe what you mean by "crystal" as that can be rather obscure too.

Okay, alright, uh-huh, and finished...

If you need proof of skill, then let me use it in a practice fight and I'll show you I don't need to god mod to whoop some ars with it.

El Bump

OMFG Re-Bump!

My skills don't change entirely!