Akisu abell

Name: Akisu Abell
Race: Shinigami
age: two-hundred and fifty
vizuale: age 25
gender: male
divison: tenth
Personality: Akisu is a loner and hates to be the center of attention. He will not follow a rule if he feels it is unjust or morally wrong. He rarley communicates with people but if he does it would usually be a female. In times of crises he talks to cresent dawn his sword. Akisu has no feelings and wouls prefer to die in battle than from old age. He always looks for a fight and if you manage to become his friend he would quickly give his life for you. he can see past a perons guise and see what there true intentions and if they should die which he might due considering he is mentaly unstable. He also dosen't like to go out because he might run into people this could change overtime. Even though he dosen't like a lot of people he is crazy about girls. The main reason he dosn't like to be out with a lot of people is because he fears that if he loses control and becomes mentally unstable he would destroy all those around him and eventually began an attack on the soul society and possibly destroy any close to him.

apperance: Akisu has jet blackhair and short bangs the left side is always pointed up. He is six four and of an average build he has one gigantic scar going across his back. He also always wears a necklace with yin and yang on it plus the sun and a silver dragon with a dark orb in it that helps control his mental instability.

history:

Growing up without a family made Akisu cold towards the world. Not needing friends made him an exeptional student. He was always a veru untalkitive person who could see spirits. Known throught much of his scholl as a brawler which is true but he only fought if he felt the person deserved it eventually he caught the attention of a gang after beating up one of the members for trying to force a girl into his car knowing what he was gonna do if he got her out of sight Akisu pulled the guy out of the car and pummled him. Finnaly one day the gang cornered him he put up a goof fight in the begining but it was him against twenty he was blugoned with a 2 by 4 before he went unconsious he was was shot between the eyes.
Life before Shinigami
As a spirit he roamed around not sure what to do until one day he was attacked by a hollow and saved by Gin Ichimaru who relized their was promise in the boy so from their he took him and got him into the academy.

Life as a Shinigami.
at the academy he graduated in his second year. From there he trained trying to become the ultimate warrior. He was placed in the tenth divison even though he wanted in the eleventh divison. He later began to like life in the tenth divison and started to slack off on traning which would almost be his undoing when he was ambushed by hollowas and would have died if it wasn't for a company of shinigami who was passing by. He never forgot this and trains feverishly to this day. He wants to see every Espada dead but he knows he is not strong enough yet. He constantly studies the Espada hoping to find a weakpoint that he could exploit during battle and use to wipe them all out which would be benaficiral to all members of the soul society. He never had any aspects about being a captin and might even turn any offers down. Latley he has been trying to get earthbound missions as he prefers it down there than in the soul society.

you need to add alot more to personality and backgound.

does this meet standards.

add on another 120 words and ill call you approved.

I added 60 to both of the paragraphs.

where is your life before yewr a shinigami?
add that and expand andy yew'll be approved
i would suggest you go read the hisotries of some of the other approved shini gami characters so you know how much they wrote and the detail they put in..

Now if someone would like to approve this i can get on with my character.

Bah.. Approved.