Hikeru Zayami

Name: Hikeru Zayami (Light in the Darkness)

Manifestation: a green humanoid-dragon

Release Phrase: Shine your Light, Burn away the Darkness!

Family: Light/Holy

Level: shikai/

Sealed Zanpaktou: A claymore style sword, with a guard which has four prongs coming out of the hilt, protecting his wielders hand, curving backwards, and the jutting out at a 90-degree angle at the tip.

Shikai: A zanbatou/zabouta sized sword, which he usually carries on his shoulder. the blade alone is 7ft and the hilt is another 2ft, with the guards remaining, but two have reversed them selves to point forward, and moved right above the other two. The tip is hidden in the blade, which has similar prongs to the hilt at the end, which are used to hold an enemy against a solid surface, while the tip of the blade shoots out and decapitates them.

Shikai Ability: Hikeru allows it's wielder to manipulate and bend light to their will, causing their spiritual pressure to appear as a holy golden flame. It allows one to enter his/her opponents mind, and find what wil truly break them.

Bankai:

Bankai Ability:

Techniques:

Invisible Enemy
Renders wielder invisible to any wavelength of light (if wavelength is changes, have a 1 post interval to adapt)
2 post duration, 3 post cool down

Prismal Blast
collects a ball of light energy in the tip of the zan, which is thrown at an enemy
cool down time varies, as it is only however long the wielder decides to collect the nessicary energy.
Multiple shots in 1 post, 1 post cool down

Divine Flame
User can breath a strem of golden fire, which will consume all that enters it.
1 post use, 1 post cool down

OMG no...just no... look at other peoples apps and you will see why i am not allowing this.

Seeing as Jaden is just utterly baffled by this zanpaktou lol, let me tell you the flaws of your zanpaktou so you can fix it...

-Duration and Cooldown time must be expressed in a number of posts. Example: A technique may last for 2 posts and the cooldown is 4 posts. NO MINUTES OR SECONDS.

-As a new shinigami, you DO NOT have Bankai. The only way to obtain Bankai is to become a captain or train for it when you reach the appropriate requirements. So your zanpaktou level is shikai, no exceptions.

-Your shikai must obviously have a default ability other than your techniques so fill in the "shikai ability" part of your zanpaktou application so we know what your power is. Oh... and please do not say "the ability to manipulate all light". If light is your element, of course you can manipulate it, DUH!

-Your "Light Speed" technique is completely outrageous, no man can move at light speed; it would literally disintegrate them because of the massive amount of friction. That technique cannot be editted, remove it completely. The technique is not only a god-mod, but a general impossibility.

There you go, now edit it all =/.

Is this acceptable?