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| Subject: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:15 am | |
| Name: Pyuadoku (Pure Poison) Manifestation: - Spoiler:
Release Phrase: Leave the Fatal Blow, Pyuadoku Family: Poison Level: Bankai Sealed Zanpaktou: A Normal Purple Hilted Katana Shikai: The Blade is now black and there is an iron retracting cord (it can't retract farther than 100 meters) that comes out of the end of the hilt. At the other side of the cord is a small blade. On the small blade, the tip is covered in a poison that causes the area that it hits to go numb. (Kensei has an immunity to this poison as well) Shikai Ability: The blade is covered in Botulinum, the most deadly poison known to man although Kensei has developed an immunity to it. When the opponent is slashed/cut/etc by the blade, the Botulinum makes the person go through these stages. (Also, his shikai gives him immunities to every type of poison there is) First Stage/the next post after the opponent is slashed: The botulinum starts to mess with the nerve impulses and starts to cause flaccid (sagging) paralysis of muscles. Although it is minor at first. The opponent starts to feel that they cannot feel where they were slashed and soon that place will be paralyzed. Although the paralyzement takes another 3 posts to cause. Although it still minor. Second Stage: 5 posts after the opponent was slashed: The Botulinum will start to form spores in the body where they were slashed (the spores are what produce Botulinum). Where they were slashed, the opponent cannot feel the area and will have to struggle on using it (paralyzement). (If a wrist is cut, the opponent will have trouble being able to move it) Third Stage: 10 posts after the opponent was slashed: The spores are now starting to produce more Botulinum in the body causeing higher Paralyzement in the area and the brain wont be able to send information to the nerves meaning the opponent can't feel what is going on. Also the paralyzement starts to spread along the body from where it was slashed. So if your back was slashed, it would head to your neck, arms, and legs. Meaning don't get your back slashed. Bankai: N/A Bankai Ability: N/A Techniques: Name: Poison Gas Effect: Out of the sword, it releases a small quantity of mustard gas that covers an area of 10 square meters. The burning sensation it causes on contact with the skin is similar to that caused by oil from black mustard seeds. The compound is not a gas but a colorless, oily liquid with a somewhat sweet, agreeable odor; it boils at 217°C. A powerful vesicant, mustard gas causes severe blistering even in small quantities. Highly irritating to the eyes, it quickly causes conjunctivitis and blindness. If inhaled, it attacks the respiratory tract and lungs, causing pulmonary edema. (Kensei has gained an immunity to this poison) Duration and or Cooldown: The gas last for 3 posts and has an 8 post cooldown. Name: Methanol Burst Effect: Kensei can send out a blast of pure Methanol at the opponent. This poison causes blindness. Do for OP reasons, this Methanol won't kill you if you get too much. (if this doesn't hit your face, the methanol can either be entered through the body through a wound or if it hits normal skin, the Methanol will evaporate and head for the eyes) Duration and or Cooldown: A cooldown of 3 posts Name: Neurotoxicity Effect: When the sword strikes, this adds on to the Botulinum effect, The Neurotoxins cover the blade and when they strike, they sink through the skin and damage the nervous tissue to a higher extreme. They will kill the neurons which are key cells that transmit and process signals in the brain and other parts of the nervous system. When it strikes, unlike the Botulinum, it will take effect sooner(the post after the opponent was slashed/cut/etc). The Neurontoxin will start to disolve the nervous tissue after 10 posts. The only way to stop it from disolving is if the opponent releases a large amount of reiatsu. Duration and or Cooldown: 3 post cooldown Name: Heal Effect: If Kensei goes up against another poison user, he can use this technique to quickly make white blood cells that can go up against the poison that was put into him. After 2 posts that the poison was put into him is when it was healed meaning in those 2 posts the symptoms will still be going on. Although every post, the symptoms lessin.
Last edited by Kensei Itonami on Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:31 pm; edited 7 times in total |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:16 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:50 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:52 pm | |
| approved unless another admin has a problem(s) with it i have missed |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:55 pm | |
| I am adding something to the third stage. I'd like to add that the paralyzement starts to spread along the body from where it was slashed. So if your back was slashed, it would head to your neck, arms, and legs. Meaning don't get your back slashed :3 |
| | | Mr. Polk
Posts : 439 Points : 659 Join date : 2009-03-04 Age : 31 Location : Aurora, Colorado
| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:02 pm | |
| add a 4 post cooldown and approved | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:06 pm | |
| this isn't a technique, this is part of the ability O.o |
| | | Mr. Polk
Posts : 439 Points : 659 Join date : 2009-03-04 Age : 31 Location : Aurora, Colorado
| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:32 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:13 pm | |
| sigh... editing my zan...again.... lol... anyways, i changed it to tthat Kensei's zan grants him the immunities to every poison known to man although this isn't exactly op if he faces another poison user. If that poison user has their own custom poison or something, then he doesn't automatically have the immunity |
| | | Kylita Anari
Posts : 100 Points : 341 Join date : 2009-01-18 Age : 31 Location : underwater
| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:46 pm | |
| hmm... alright approved lovie~~ | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:29 pm | |
| due to my amount of points, i shall now be a Lt with BANKAI!!! xDDDD
Zakanjin Pyuadoku (The Vital Pure Poison)
Bankai: Kensei now holds a scythe with a 3 yard long staff and a dark black blade on each end. Each of the blades face the opposite way meaning if the staff was spun then the blades would be spinning the same way. In the middle of the staff, the double bladed scythe can be put into half. inside of where the staff is taken apart, there is a chain that can extend to 100 meters. The chain is also black. The blades are also coated with a poison that makes the area it hits go numb. Along with his weapon, he is now wearing the same black trench coat as his manifestation.
Bankai Ability: Besides the bankai's normal ability, because of the small bankai, most of the bankai power is condensed (like ichigo's bankai) into the small form meaning that most of the bankai is put into Kensei's speed and strength. His speed is the flash step doubled and his strength is doubled as well. Even though bankai strength is usually stronger, Kensei's bankai is stronger than that. The normal ability of this bankai is that he can control his poison in a liquid form. He can create this poison and form it from his zanpakuto and the surfaces around him. He can control the poison's direction, speed, etc. Also he can control on how he makes the poison attack. He could make a cero-sized blast of poison and/or make small beams erupt from the surfaces around him. He can also make poison waves. Not to mention he can make a shield of the liquid poison around him that is similar to a water sphere shield. Basically it's just the same poison spinning around him at high speeds protecting him and possibly hurting the enemy. In other words, he can fully manipulate the poison at his will so basically he can control the poison with his mind or his hands and he can even control it with his scythes. One of the odd ways to use it considering his speed is that he can make a busrt of the poison erupt from under him shooting him up into the air. Keep in mind that he has an immunity to every poison that is known. So you'd think he would have an immunity to a poison that he created... which he does.
Now on to what the poison does. This poison is like the Botulinum but to a higher extreme. Since this is bankai, the poison does not take as long to take effect. If this poison touches your skin, the skin will start to get extremely irritated in just a few seconds. This is basically used to distract the opponent. Although the irritation doesn't give in and go away unless the opponent has a way to heal himself from it. Although there is no immunity to this poison so if the opponent has an ability to heal the effects of the poison, it doesn't mean that they can or will grow and immunity to it. After one post, a paralyzing effect will take place. The poison will sink through the skin and take control of the nerves and basically.... freeze them in some way. Thus that area is paralyzed. The only bad thing is that it doesn't affect the irritation, while the opponent can't use the area that the paralysis took place, they will still have the terrible irritation. Although it takes 3 posts for this to fully take effect although captain strength opponents take 6 posts before they are fully paralyzed. So each post the paralysis will slightly get worse and worse. If this poison hits the opponents eyes, the poison will enter the eye and blind them as long as his bankai is activated. If this poison enters the body, it will travel through the bloodstreams and give off an infection that causes a bad headache, nausea, terrible coughing and sneezing, a bad stomach, and it will cause the opponent to feel drowsy. Basically like a high fever. Allthough it would take 3 posts after this enters the body for it to fully take affect. Meaning every post it will be like the paralysis effect and it will slightly get worse and worse. Unless the opponent has some way to heal himself from the effects, it will not fully stop 'til Kensei unactivates his bankai.
and just so you know, this isn't op with the effects, it should be avoidable unless the opponent isn't as strong as Kensei.
I made me bankai! Can i train yet? lol >>
Last edited by Kensei Itonami on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:55 am; edited 4 times in total |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:05 pm | |
| Erm, could you add a post ammount before the opponent is FULLY paralized? Say, captain strength - 6 posts etc.
Other than that, approved. |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:10 pm | |
| edited and cool, i'll start me training |
| | | Yoshi Nedaj
Posts : 130 Points : 468 Join date : 2009-01-21 Location : Soul Society
| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:50 pm | |
| next time train first bucko. | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 7:44 pm | |
| lol, shouldn't i know what i'm going to train for? |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 8:56 pm | |
| sorry for double posting but i made a slight appearance change. I just added that i'd be wearing the same black trench coat as my manifestation. |
| | | Zeroshin Hakura
Posts : 152 Points : 374 Join date : 2009-02-24
| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:05 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:07 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:03 pm | |
| lol, i have one more edit, i'd like to put in that i can manipulate what form the poison is in meaning that i'd be able to control the poison in it's gas, solid, and liquid form. The same attacks work with it though meaning he can thrust gas like beams and such. Basically total manipulation. Also, if the liquid form is frozen, then i'd be able to turn it back to gas or back to liquid. and with the solid form, i'm able to manipulate it in ways to where i can make attacks with it like a can thrust a large amoung of solid poison at the enemy. Also, the poison in the solid form still takes affect and in the gas form, i'd be able to enclose the enemy in it and the poison takes affect. :3 and also, would it be an auto hit if i enclosed the enemy in the gas then solified it or if i liquified it and drowned them? although then they'd be able to... drop out of it >> |
| | | Chinou
Posts : 187 Points : 320 Join date : 2009-04-18
| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:10 pm | |
| That would be overpowering your already powerful bankai tommy/ | |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:12 pm | |
| lol, then i guess i shouldn't put it in? |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:54 am | |
| Zakanjin Pyuadoku (The Vital Pure Poison)
Ya, i forgot to put this in, this is my bankais name >> |
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| Subject: Re: Pyuadoku Thu Jul 30, 2009 6:50 pm | |
| Your Bankai name is approved.....? |
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