Burēdokasai

Name: Burēdokasai (Blade of Fire)

Manifestation: A humanoid male around 6 ft tall with dark features. His pitch black hair and fiery red eyes give him the look of a demon. He covers the lower half of his face with a piece of red cloth and has a dark crimson cape. He is also wearing a black shirt with sleeves torn off. His pants are black as well. His shoes are normal every day shoes that are crimson and black. He's relatively skinny and moderately muscular. Despite the dark appearance something about him calms any who would see him.

Release Phrase: Ignite Burēdokasai!

Family: Fire

Level: Shikai

Sealed Zanpakuto: It has a very large blade about a foot and a half wide that is normal in color , and its total length is exactly 6 feet long. The blade is double edged for better use for instance if it were to fall to the ground beside the opponent it would be difficult for a large one edged blade to counteract an attack but a double edge allows for constant movement back and forth while still attacking. Burēdokasai is the size it is to slow down Veern to around 17 Miles Per Hour. His top speed is devastating. He can move at about a mile a second in hours it would be approximately 1700 Miles Per Hour.

Shikai: The Zanpacto becomes half the width of its Sealed form making it 9 inches wide. The blade also becomes a glowing red color like metal that had been heated in fire for hours. The handle becomes longer and the blade shorter but it stays a total of 6 ft long. The blade becomes one sided and the guard is on the bladed side. Its guard is an extremely detailed carved dragon, down to every scale and visible tooth, that wraps its tail around the first inch of the blade and has wings that help protect the hands.

Shikai Ability: When in it's shikai form Burēdokasai becomes blisteringly hot to the touch causing pain and stopping bleeding immediately. This becomes handy in cases of torture due to the only way they would die is cutting the arteries that bring oxygen to the heart and brain. It also allows Veern's speed to become ten times what it is when he is carrying his Sealed Zanpakuto and therefore that much more devestating.

Bankai:

Bankai Ability:

Techniques:

Name: Yaketsuku Yō Na Taiki Ha
Effect: Veern swings the blade sending a large wave of searing heat that can cause quick dehydration and possibly burns on those sensitive to heat.
Duration and or Cooldown: Unsure about how this would work but it can only be used once every five posts.

Name: Makikomu Honoo
Effect: Energy builds and the blade becomes surrounded by fire that burns anything but its master.
Duration and or Cooldown: Lasts 3 posts and has to cooldown for 2 posts after before it can be used again.

Name: Kasai No Kabe
Effect: Veern stabs the blade into ground and a wall of fire encircles a radius equal to the energy used. Ten feet at minimal energy and the largest radius practical is 50 feet at 10% of your total energy.
Duration and or Cooldown: The fire wall lasts 2 posts and can be used again after a cooldown of 1 post.

Hmm, more description on everything.

Not completely sure on everything but I added more.

More, man. I want more information. I need specifics. If you are not sure, put up a WIP.

If this isn't good enough I will make a WIP and do some vocab. research.

PLease do so and include Techs.

This any better? I attempted to find pictures but that became to confusing for me.

Just gonna say that you need to lower that 3600 mph for your own safty. Thats faster then shunpo and shunko basically.

That's a good point... But to what?

This OK by your standards?

Still to high, but APPROVED.