ushida kane

Name; ushida kane

Rank: Shinigami

Age: 18 (350)

Appearance: kane is tall and muscular with a very intense glare he has piercing blue eyes that fit the scowl he wears. He wears the traditonal kimono of the soul reaper with a white turtle neck under it he also wears a set of dog tags to remind him of the cost of carelessness and his father. Kane has chin length silve hear that is kept puled back, he wears white shoes. He also wears a pair of white gloves with a silver stud on each nuckle, with a matching studded white belt that has a skull buckle. He carrys him self with a air of confedence in his stride. He has a tatoo behind his right ear of two crossed swords, he also wears a small chain aroiund each wrist both are a blue silver in color.

Gender: male

Personality; kane is a very driven and intense person, he fears failure more than anything . He is a very private person tending to keep to his emotions bottled up intell he blows up. But once he considers you his friend he is very loyal and protecting. He is also very honest and proper due to his military upbringing. He gets enraged at the site of a coward kane belives there is always something to stand and fight for. Kane will always be the last to pull back because he has to know every one is coming back safe. Some times kane gets him self into trouble because he won't back down from a good fight. Kane still holds the sorrow in side from the loss of his mother and father which shows its self in the way he is so protective of any one he considers a friend, he has a strong sense of duty the mission always comes first over his personal needs.

Division: Fifth

Likes: order, respect, and a good challenge

Dislikes: dishonesty, and lazynes

Specialties: tracking and good at understanding training

History: kane was born to a military family, a hard nosed officer for a father and a personal officer for a mother. His father demanded discipline and structure, and that is what he got. At a early age kane was in martial arts four days a week and soccer the other three. No matter how good he did his father always wanted more, he was the best in his martial arts class thanks to his stamina from all the soCcer but still it was not enough. Kanes mom normally never got involved inless it was to teach kane social skills or etiquette. While in junior high can't felt his first true failure, when his mom was killed by a massive stroke, kane blamed him self for not being able to save her. That day the divide between him and his father grew, they would never again share common ground. The next few years of kanes life went on the same as those before just colder, fighting became his only solatude in life. In his senior year kane was training for the biggest moment of his life, the high school national martial arts tournament. For once it finally seemed like every thing might get better, his father said he would come see the fight. He trained harder then ever in hopes of the approval of his father. The night of the tournament he stood ready by the mat for the time to show his father his skill. While taking the mat kane noticed the his father in the front row with that unpleased look on his face, but soon that would change. Little did he know tonight would define him forever, the match seemed to fly by. Kane won in decisive fashion knocking his opponent out. His father smiled which was a victory in its self , on the walk home they decided to walk thru the park so they could talk which was a nice cause they had not done it in a while. While walking thru the park they heard a girl crying they looked and saw her knelling under a lamp post. Kane walked up and asked her if she was ok, as he placed his hand on her shoulder she spun on her right foot driving a six inch knife into his chest. As he layed on the growned fighting to stay awake he wathed two men attack his father with bats beating him tell he stopped moving. Then like cowards he watched as they robbed his father and ran off. Kane crawled to his father on the virge of death kane heard his fathers last words "I love u son and I'm so proud of u". His father died and kane followed that night. Kane spent the next hundred years searching the soul society for his father, with no luck kane fell to pity drinking by day and passing out in the streets at night. One day while drinking two men tryed to pick a fight and they succeded. Kane jumped over the table breaking his glass over ones head and breaking the others nose with the heel of his right foot.before kane could strike again three guys in black kimonos with swords rushed to stop him. With out thinking kane caught the first one with a spinning back fist knocking him out. Beffore he could move again a man dressed like the other Three only wearing a white jacket struck kane from out of no wear. When kane awoke in the street there was only one thing on his mind being better then the man in the white jacket. Kane went to the academy where he trained hard and long to graduate top of his class, once he joined the thirteen court guard squads he did the same and worked as hard as he could to climb the ranks intel he got to where he needed to be. With in striking distance of the captain who stopped him that day.


Should I post my sword to I thought I would wait to see rank first

Write more on appearance, and personality.

I added to them

Get rid of your specialty, if you do that in battle it'll be a bit god moddy.

I changed the special for u waiting on approval

Im going to edit your user name so that its capital letters.

Approved, if the Captain Spot is open, you may have it.

Thalks

I don't wanna be a spoil sport, but make an RP sample if you want a captain spot and their already is a 10th division captain who just replaced Aden Williams the former tenth division captain. The new one is called Tokishi and he has a good RP sample, so if you want a captain spot, you better have an Rp sample.

I would be happy with lieutenant

The sooner I know the sooner I can start and that is my goal

Mkay, approved as ordinary shinigami, but just ask some dudes with white names if you can be their LT.

RP SAMPLE

Today started lik any other Kane woke and headed to 10th divisions training ground to get in his daily work out,"its quite" Kane thought to him self. The doors to the training grounds loomed in front of him he finally felt at ease as he always did when he trained. Kane reached for the door with he's right hand and pushed the door open, as he walked threw the door he saw a strange man sitting with his legs crossed. Kane relized that he did not recognize this man even tho he wore the kimono of a soul reaper, Kane reached down with his left hand and grabbed the scabbard of Kinshido placing his thumb on the guard. Grabbing the hilt with his right can addressed the man "who are you and why are u hear".
With just a smirk the man stood, Kane exstended his thumb clearing his blade just an inch feeling the silver banding under his right hand he repeated "who are you" with anger creeping into his voice. The man replied "I am the man who is going to kill you" as his smirk became a full on smile. With out flinching Kane drew his blade as Kinshido echoed in his mind "finally some fun". Kane stood ready to attack, in almost the blink of an eye the unknown man was right in front of Kane sword drawn and bearing down on Kane in a over head downward strike. Kane perried the attack of to his right and struck out at the unknown man with a slash from left to right, but just before Kinshido could taste blood the man jumped back with a laugh "your to slow the man shouted.
"He is so fast" Kane thought to him self but before he could finish the thought the unknown man lunged for Kane again, Kane was ready tho and he was not there when the mans blade cut the air were Kane just stood. Kane was now three feet to the right of the unknown man " I don't have time to play with you, emerge from the forge Kinshido".

Kane stood before the man his blade now having a slight S curve and chained to his wrist and forearm, the unknown man laughed " good I was hoping you would not go to easy" the unknown man said smuggle. He then said some thing Kane could not hear and in a flash the mans sword became a dual sided axe. Kane rotated Kinshido so the tip faced the ground,"blades of deception" kane said as he stabbed the ground, 15 man sized blades rose from the ground scatterd around the unknown man. Kane drew his blade from the ground and with a smile stepped into one of the blades vanishing.

The unknown man stood redy for something to happen, from just behind the man to his left a sword and forearm emerged striking at the man. He dogged to the left almost dodging the strike completlly bud Kane caught the man in his right shoulder with a shallow strike. Then Kanes arm vanished into the blade again, the man enraged gripped his axe in both hands said "spread" a black energy field emited from the axe breaking all the blades the man laughed.
"Sad I thought you would last longer" the man said as his axe turned back into a sword an sheathed it, as he did a man sized blade emerged from the ground behind him and Kane emerged. The unknown man reached for his sword but it would be to late "banki" kane said and with a flash of light Kane stood before the man with chain rapped around his chest and rapped down his right arm connecting to a a nine foot double ended schimatar. The man looked shocked, Kane smiled as he stabbed the ground with one end of the sword "blades of deception" Kane yelled. 30 man sized blades rose up scattered around the man, Kane smiled as he drew his double ended blade from the ground he struck the blade nearest him and yelling "shatter". As he did all thirty blades broke into hundreds of thousands of small shards of razor sharp metal, before the unknown man could react the shards merged on the man there was a violent exsplosion. When the smoke cleared the man was layed on the ground bloody and burnt But no longer breathing. Kane frowned to his self as Kinshido returned to his sealed form " who are you" Kane said in a low curious tone ." I will have to inform the captain commander" Kane thought to him self as he turned and headed to the division 1 headquarters.

There you go just waiting on word back thanks

Umm, your spelling is wrong a bit on some parts, and in some parts you used CB terms.

Quote :

"who are you and why are u hear".

You wrote that and in RP you write in whole words, not just short cuts and little tip. Don't overuse your char's name. I mean, if you start your sentences with He and Kane and stuff all the time, it gets boring and dull. So, say like" Young reaper" or something and also put more description on your surroundings. Work on that and you'll be approved.

Consider it done I was half asleep when I wrote it with my cell I can do more detail no problem so consider it done thanks

Okay, Approved.