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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Dabura Moji Retsu Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:45 pm | |
| Name: daburu moji retsu (double string) Bow Manifestation: - Spoiler:
Description: Daburu Moji Retsu uses a different number of ways to shoot. By using each string on its own it can shoot extremely fast letting loose about fifty arrows of medium to weaker power. But another way is by pulling back both strings at once for a shot it gains a considerable amount of power released into any number from 1 to 10 arrows of critical power. Tech 1 Name: Grand Tunnel Effect: A shot is fired with the use of both bow strings which resembles the one that uryuu shot at mayuri at the end of their fight in season three. That is a gigantic tunneling cylinder beam approx 50 feet in diameter and reaches about half a mile. Duration: Just a one turn shot Cool Down: cools down for 2 turns after use. Tech 2 Name: Sniper’s Eye Effect: The users awareness of his opponent’s actions increases therefore he can anticipate their movements and this in turn increases accuracy to at least three fold.` Duration: Effects last for 5 turns Cool Down: After effects fade it takes 2 rounds to recharge. Tech 3 Mame: Back Door Effect: A single arrow is shot that travels several yards until it implodes upon itself and forms a portal to anywhere the user has been before. Duration: Portal last for two turns Cool Down: Three Turns Techniques: Rules in making Techs: 1-99 posts: 2 techs 100-199: 3 techs 200-299: 4 techs 300-399: 5 techs.... and so on... you can add more techs as your posts go up. NOTE: The Master Quincy have the number of their techs increased by 1 and may have one extra glove. (this is what I have so far, and so I shall reply with the custom equiptment and the final form if I qualify. Not sure since no one has aactually ranked me yet.)
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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:30 pm | |
| The second glove: Name: yōso no jōgi (ruler of the elements) Bow Manifestation: - Spoiler:
Description: This bow fires with the normal rapid shot technique, with a twist. Each arrow is enhanced the element of fire. As far as fire rate how does a norm of 60 sound. Tech 1: Name: Magma shot. Effect: Arrows are enhanced with the element of fire, which has the power to burn through most substances. Duration: 1 round Cool down: 1 round Tech 2: Name: Night Phoenix Effect: This shot takes the form of a bird composed entirely of fire. It flies until within three feet of an enemy and then explodes causing a blast radius that affects everyone within twenty feet of the fire. Duration: until within range or after three turns and it auto blows up Cool Down: three turns cool after use Tech 3: Name: Cavern Carver Effect: Much like Grand Tunnel but enhanced with fire Duration: 1 turn shot Cool Down: 2 turn cool after use
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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Wed Mar 10, 2010 10:04 pm | |
| (now all that is left is final form, h00ray) Custom Equipment Name: shi furippā Type: Coin/Gun Description: Coin Form: - Spoiler:
Gun Form: - Spoiler:
Ability: There are two fancy coins that Linkin carries in his pockets everywhere he goes. These coins have the power to be transformed into a pair of twin revolvers if they are flipped while there is spirit energy being put into them. These guns rely on Linkin to load them with reishi for ammo and can be extremely lethal if used at close range like a regular six shooter. *You may add more as your post count goes up one per 100 post, however like a zanpaktou's bankai if you make one of theses or a tech for your bow/glove you cannot make one for another.* *Only Quincy Masters auto-get this, non-Master Quincy must train have 250 posts* [/center]
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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:32 pm | |
| Quincy Final FormName: saigo no kuchiku kan Appearance: - Spoiler:
Ability: Simple, an arrow has something like a homing device of a target of the shooter’s choosing and can follow them for about three turns. And whenever these shots make contact with the desired target they spontaneously combust, causing a large explosion directly from inside the opponent. Limit:*You can only use the final form for ten post, then you must wait ten more post before you can use it again.At this time you cannot use the bow/glove/armor or any abilities connected to it, you must also be an elite Quincy to even have this form.* | |
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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:33 pm | |
| okay I believe that I'm ready to be approved | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:06 am | |
| Ahem, your first bow's ability is quite vague... It doesn't write how strong it is, how many shots you can fire.. Please be more descriptive on your abilities and not just fill it up with techniques. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:12 am | |
| Block out the sun is god moddy... Too godmoddy, it doesn't show any sign of weakness from what I see. If you target only one guy then he's dead meat if he doesn't use some epic shit to block it. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:17 am | |
| Still too godmoddy... You can pick the area where your enemy is. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:26 am | |
| Pick one element for your second bow, all elements is godmoddy. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:42 am | |
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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:07 am | |
| the first tech isn't that powerful at all, but the other two can cause second to third degree burns depending on how directly affected some one is. Meaning the more that their hit the more badly burned they are. Its not all incineration if that's what you meant. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:55 pm | |
| Bows approved, techniques and final form are left lying there for now. |
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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Mon Mar 15, 2010 2:30 am | |
| since my bow hasen't been fully approved yet and i never used my custom equipt in RP or even non-story RP I made a new item that is a little more useful. Now I need this one looked over. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Mon Mar 15, 2010 5:26 am | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Mon Mar 15, 2010 5:29 am | |
| Your custom equipment is approved. |
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Tsuneo
Posts : 113 Points : 80 Join date : 2010-03-19 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:29 am | |
| bumb
can i get more than one out of six techs approved | |
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Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:44 pm | |
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Tsuneo
Posts : 113 Points : 80 Join date : 2010-03-19 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:10 pm | |
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Tsuneo
Posts : 113 Points : 80 Join date : 2010-03-19 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Dabura Moji Retsu Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:47 pm | |
| yet another bump........will this ever get looked over? I am under vizard/espada attack so a few techs would be nice. | |
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