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PostSubject: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 10, 2010 5:32 am

Name: kurosaki, kurisu (last name first of course)

Rank: no one yet

Age: Acual age: 140
Appearing age: 21

Appearance: Clothing: Standard soul reaper robes, with shorter sleves.
hair: short dark red hair.
Height: 5' 9"
Build: regular
Eyes: dark blue

Gender: male


Personality: Kurisu is a very nice guy, he does things slowly but when he is fighting hollows, he is one of the best, Kurisu hear much music and a little angry there is no properly music in soul soceity
in his free time when he not fighting hollows or something like that he find a place he can relax and stare up in the sky.
kurisu is very dumb when it come to hard questions, his oppenion is they can ask the 12th division
his big idol is Byakuya kuchiki, sometime he use his time to ask soi fon on a date, his favorite game is hide and seek with Yachiru Kusajishi

favorite food: lasagne
Crushes: soi fon soifon
likes: relaxing, music and fighting hollows
dislike: paperwork

Division: kido corps

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Specialties: cooking

History: kurisu went on karakura high school, he was the first born in the kurosaki family, his siblings like him very much and him and the dad fight always, he has good to math English and japanse, but most of the time he stared of the window he is a relaxed person and take everything slowly
he was on he’s way home to dinner, he crossed a road when he heard a horn it was a giant truck there hit him and after that he was dead, he woke up has a terrible headache he suddenly saw the strange chain to his chest, he looked around and saw his body lie there and he realized he was dead and started to walk around, suddenly he heard a big roar it was a hollow he began to run when he heard: ROAR ZABIMARU , a sword sliced trough the hollow and kurisu was saved the strange man renji said he will send kurisu to soul society, and poked him in the head with the back of his sword hilt, Kurisu was now in soul society but it was not a beautiful place like someone has told him He begin to get borrow when he saw his grandmother he asked her if he could sleep at her for the night, she said yes to that,he decided he wanna hang out in this crappy place so i ran to Seiretei to hear about he could join the soul reapers he could join but he has to get to the soul acadamy were he should syudy sword fighting, kido and about hollows and hollows ranks, he was very depressed, he thourgt that he never should in school again but if he could get a better life in what there was out side the seiretei, he will do it, he get a blue soul reaper student cloth he should wear and he thinks it was better in the cloth he was he now so he go to a room and changed, later on the acadamy the students scould try to fire a hado number 33 kurisu was not very good at it in the start for every time he try to fire he look over to a beautiful girl and the spell exploed in his hand before he fired it when he was practicing with sword he was one of the best in the class and was one of the first that had mastered shunpo when he was done with the exam he gratueded and was assigned to squad 6. and the girl he was in love with was assigned squad 2, in the backyard of squad 6 he began to train to learn he's zanoukato's name and after a few month he learn how to release his Zanpukato. kurisu was one of the greatest soul reaper in scuard 6 and had killed many hollows every time he get a mission were he get the job to send a soul to soul society, and this continued in many years at least some of the captains were impressed that he had give so many soul burial and defeated so many hollows but in squad 12 there was alert there was a arrancar how terror the souls in the karakura town so the head captain call kurisu and give him the mission to take down the arrancar, he was happy to get a opportunity like this and ran through the gate to the world to find the arrancar but a soon he get to the human world he get a heavy kick in the back and fly through a building an get hurt, it was a surprise attack from behind, but kurisu has trained for this in the time he became a soul reaper so he used a Bakudō number 61 ( six rod prison of light ) so the arrancar after that he call his zanpaktou and strike the arrancar while it was defenseless and won over it, when kurisu went back to soul soceity the captain of squard 2, 10, 11 was agree about he could be a exellent captain and so he went to a test to prove what he had to become a captain and had pass the test he was now the captain of squad 6, and one of the job was to find a new Lieutenant wand that was difficult because there was many good soul reapers he could use


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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 10, 2010 5:37 am

More on everything... Description.... Appearance, History, and Personality.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 1:32 am

is this good enogh ?
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 3:07 am

Not yet, more on personality.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 5:35 am

then it's fine ?
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 5:38 am

RP Sample...
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 5:50 am

it's my first role play ^^

so i dont have any rp sample
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 6:18 am

Then you can't be a captain without an RP sample... I suggest you learn first.. Like, go for an ordinary division like the 5th division.. Would you like to join the 5th division, hm?
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 3:28 pm

if it can help me to be captain in squad 6 but where can i get a rp sample ?
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 12, 2010 3:35 pm

An Rp sample is something you write for example, I will give you an example, but don't copy other people's RP sample, okay?


This is a sample I made.

There he was... Shinji was standing on top of the roof top of the high school... Being a sixteen year old was not fun... The teenager's these days make Shinji look bad just by existing... Then he walked over to the edge of the roof... The young master quincy looked down, he saw the many people walking in and out of the school... The sun was shining brightly, but it was a bit of an annoyance... It was a very hot day... Then he stepped back a bit, then quickly ran and jumped off the roof and was heading down to the ground...

With his black trench coat, white polo with a black tie, cargo pants... The man jumped down and landed safely... Many people started as he landed safely on the ground from around five stories high... Then he put his hands into his jacket's pockets and walked onward... Yawning a bit he was tired and bored so he decided to have a bit of fun... The young vice leader quincy stopped at the side walk then took out a coin shaped disk from his jacket's right pocket then crushed it.... What was it you ask? It was the hollow bait... A large smirk appeared on his face as the hollows gathered around him... Shinji laughed out loud then disappeared from the eyes of the hollows.... He appeared above them, in mid-air... With his bow ready he fired off many arrows, one by one, he shot them at the head....

Disappeared again he then prepared his bow at the blue sky as a black gate opened up a new hollow arrived and was quickly subdued by a reiatsu arrow.. Then preparing another reishi arrow five more arrived... He dispersed his spiritual bow then started yelling" Come on, you little bastards! Come and get me, I don't have any weapons on me, I am vulnerable as hell." the screams of hollows rung in his ears as they quickly ran towards him, as they passed him by he then had his bow already and as they slowly disappeared he said "Psych... Foolish hollows... How boring." he then yawned out of boredom... The young vice leader quincy then folded his arms behind his head and walked..

Thirty minutes later

The young master quincy was walking around in the city, he was in front of his apartment building... It looked very much like an office building... He then walked through the front door and went into the huge lobby... The lobby was like a hotel, Shinji's room was at the top floor... He then went towards the elevator which stood at the end of the lobby room... He entered it and pushed the button, then the metal doors shut and it lifted the elevator up to his floor.... He arrived at his apartment and went towards the window and watched down... He then chuckled and said "Aww, the hollow bait wasn't as effective from the looks of it... Damn.. Oh well, I'll just hunt some shinigami or hollow.... More fun that way." with a smirk on his face he then pushed open a window, then jumped through it... He was at the top floor and it was forty stories high.. Then he disappeared again.... Arriving on top of a car down there, a kid caught sight of Shinji and looked surprised...

The young master quincy waved and disappeared again... The vice leader quincy appeared near Dunkin' doughnuts from what it seemed... The man folded the sleeves of his jacket and polo.. Then he took out two coin shaped disks from his right pocket, held it out in his palm and crushed it again... The hollow bait...

The quincy always brought around twenty hollow bait with him everyday for him to crush when he was bored... Then a gillian appeared in front of him... Then five other hollows.... Shinji shrugged his shoulders and said"Meh, not as many, but at least it attracted a gillian." he then disappeared and appeared above the six hollows in mid-air, his spiritual bow prepared, then he pulled back around four arrows with his right hand then shot them at the lesser hollows... The gillian and the other one was left... The other one tried a sneak attack on the young vice leader, but he quickly used hirenkyaku to appear behind it and fire off an arrow... Now, all was left was the gillian..

Shinji smirked and said" Lets make it more fun." his light sky blue then disappeared as the gillian prepared a cero, gathering in front of his mouth.... Then he just stood their, silently, with a lazy look... Then the cero was fired in front of him, smoke arose.... The cero went through the ground and basically exploded.... Rubble came from the sky and started landing then a dark figure stood in all the smoke and with a light sky blue bow in his left hand he said" How boring, so easy to dodge, and even if I were to take the hit head on, it wouldn't do much damage... Oh well, what would you expect from a gillian, hm?" he then aimed his bow at the head of the gillian, lifted his right hand, put it closely to the bow, and pulled back an arrow, and disappeared again...

The young vice leader quincy appeared in front of the gillian and said" Perish" then he fired the blue reishi arrow and went straight through his head... It disappeared with a screech... The stupid yell hollows always do... Then he landed on the ground and yawned again... Shinji always looked lazy, and sleepy, but in truth was a fierce man... His personality normally changes when he fights, a man who desires a good fight.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 2:58 am

so a rp is a history with other word ?
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 2:59 am

Not really a history, but it's more like writing a book.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 5:37 pm

still when you are writing a book, you are writing a history about your chareter
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:02 pm

Well, not history, but it's more about currently and stuff...
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:15 pm

sorry im a little dumb to this ^^
so i dont get you :/ ? sorry
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:17 pm

I mean, what he does, this isn't technically history... Your character can die in actual Rp fights.. So, it is not history writing.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:30 pm

oki but what if i dont wanna he die ?
and wanna like to know if i am good enough to get the Lieutenant seat in squad 6
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:32 pm

Ugh, then you fight good and win... THIS IS NOT A HISTORY THING, YOU CANNOT CONTROL LIFE AND DEATH, IF SOMEONE KILLS YOU IN RP, THEN YOU CANNOT CONTINUE RPING WITH THAT CHARACTER UNLESS YOU FIND A LEGAL WAY THAT HE IS STILL ALIVE.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:36 pm

doh so if someone kills me in here i cant use this character :/ an i need to create a new one ?
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:40 pm

Yes.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:50 pm

epic lol
oki well then i just need to practice so i wont get killed because it wery hard to find on af history to a charater over 700 words but a rp sample can i get that from Practice Fights
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:52 pm

You get better at PF's, but PF's are OOC. PF's are practice fights... You can RP at the off Rp forums... Like Le Cafe, Karakura high school, and Practice fight forum..
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:57 pm

oki i get it now an if i get a rp sample and some more line on my Personality i get be a captain in the gotai 13 ?
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 6:57 pm

Depends on how good it is.
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PostSubject: Re: kurosaki, kurisu   kurosaki, kurisu I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 13, 2010 7:09 pm

oki but can i get a Lieutenant seat with what i have already written ?
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