Zorro de la Tempestad

Name: Zorro de la Tempestad

Release Phrase: "Desplome abajo con las quijadas que truenan" (Collapse down with Roaring Jaws)

Represent: Fox

Element: Lightning

Sealed Description: Looks like a normal katana with a dark purple handle and yellow threads woven in. The guard is a seven pointed star with jagged arcs

Initial Release: When first summoned, four large, dark clouds begin to move in, blotting out the sky. (The clouds are just regular dark storm clouds, folks o.o nothing special. >.>) A bolt of spiritual pressure, condensed to resemble a massive burst of lightning, envelops her, triggering her transformation. Her primary weapon is the Naginata she weilds. The blade surges with an ellectrical current that delivers a powerful jolt when it comes in contact with the flesh of her enemy. The jolt it delivers is usually anywhere between 500-1000 volts of concentrated electricity. Her agujas de acero deliver a weak yet paralyzing 200-450 volt shock.

The clouds look like the image below

Spoiler:

Released Description: When released, her weapon becomes a double bladed naginata, one end shaped like a trident, the other shaped like a thunderbolt. Her body becomes covered in dense silver fur that is ten times harder than steel. Her body becomes more like a fox's. Her mask fragment expands, becoming a full fox skull that appears as a helmet, encasing her head. Her arms and legs become covered in bone like armor that is studded with sharp spines

Ultimate Ability/Attack:
Name: El Granizo del Relámpago
Ability: The attack only can occur if she is airborne. Val lets out a loud series of barks and howls, and releases a storm of five to ten thunderbolts from her body. They surround an enemy while a large bolt comes down the center to strike the trapped enemy
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts

Innate Ability: Agujas De Acero (Steel Needles) : Her fur Hardens to thin needles which she can fire at an enemy. Each needle is charged with static electricity. If the needle sticks intot he flesh of an enemy, it can deliver a nasty jolt that may cause paralysis.


Techniques:
Name - Tormenta del Juicio (Storm of Judgement)
' She leaps into the air and by spinning her body, her fur and tails create a massive thunderstorm that takes on the form of a hurricane. When it hits the opponent, it delivers nearly half a million volts of pure concentrated electricity. The storm can cover nearly fifty feet, but the majority of the damages is caused in the first fifteen feet of the storm.'
Post Durations: 3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts

Name - Trueno Del Rugido (Thundering Roar)
' Valentina inhales deeply, then lets out a thundering roar that creates a massive Shockwave. The blast can only reach about twenty feet in diameter, but may do serious damage to those who are caught in range. The attack is nearly fatal if it strikes at point blank range, but if it strikes at a distance, it may only leave minor burns and lacerations at the most'
Post Durations: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts

A storm? No. Never. Nope. Nada. Whatever. Anyways, no. No storm. Cloud? Yes. A cloud would most definitely be acceptable. With a storm, it's impossible to avoid the lightning strikes. That'd be an instant, unavoidable, attack. Fix that, then I shall look through it again.

Fixed

B-Bump.. o.o

Give a number of how many inky clouds and the size of them. Approved after those changes are made. The techniques though, are pending till I take a further look through them.

Done again >.>

Approved.

DENIED!

Your innate ability here, is far different from your innate ability in the character application:

"Innate Ability: Shapeshifting. At any moment, Valentina can take on the shape of a three tailed Yoko, though will appear as a normal silver fox to human eyes."

FIX that. Choose ONE. and ONE only. You little ninja ... try to sneak past me. NO <.< Not gonna happen.

ALSO:

" Her body becomes covered in dense silver fur that is ten times harder than steel. "

Hell to the N-O. NO. "Hierro is an Arrancar technique in which the user's reiryoku condenses, creating a steel-hard skin strong enough to block a Zanpakutō."

If you skin is TEN times HARDER than STEEL - that would mean you, being a FRACCION, has a harden skin than an ESPADA. No, hell to the no. You fix that too. If it's as strong as an Espada's Hierro, that's all good. But do not forget to mention how hard it becomes. You see here:

"The strength of Arrancars' Hierro depends on their spiritual power."

I don't even see how that would be possible, seeing as you do not have a higher spiritual power than an Espada. I'd advise you to just change the ability.

For now ... THIS APPLICATION IS: