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| Hana's Zanpakuto | |
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Kuraiyami Hana
Posts : 8 Points : 3 Join date : 2010-04-09
| Subject: Hana's Zanpakuto Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:38 pm | |
| Name: Zinchii
Manifestation: Long white hair that reaches the back of her knee caps; Deep yellow eyes with black slits in the middle of them along with black around the eye color itself; & allways smiles a wide smile.
Release Phrase: 'Zin, ame no kinji!'
Family: Dark/Shadow
Level: Shikai
Sealed Zanpakuto: A regular-looking katana.
Shikai: The same looking Katana, but with a line through both sides of it & afew symbols on each bottom half of the sword that helps her control her Shikai ability.
Shikai Ability: Rose Hurricaine: By circleing her sword afew times black rose pedals begin to apper made from her spirit energy in the air & circle around the area aimlessly untill she simply pushes a hand forward or upward to control how they react, as a weapon, or a sheild, each movement has to be exactly correct or the pedals loose there control & begin to attack anything that moves, even the user.
Bankai: *Captins & Vizards Only*
Bankai Ability: *Captins & Vizards Only*
Techniques: By waveing her hands around afew times depending on what she wants to sculpt from the pedals, she can make any weapon from them & use it depending on what it is. Once the weapon is made, the only way to destroy it is to have to user lose concentration on it; If this happens, the weapon will expload in black rose pedals & cut anything that is in it's way as if they were daggars. If this happens, they usually fall to the ground after loosing speed & energy after afew seconds after it exploads.
Name: *Bankai Only..?* \/ Effect: Duration and or Cooldown:
Last edited by Kuraiyami Hana on Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:24 am; edited 2 times in total | |
| | | Chinou
Posts : 187 Points : 320 Join date : 2009-04-18
| Subject: Re: Hana's Zanpakuto Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:53 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Hana's Zanpakuto Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:04 pm | |
| All right, first all. I want way more description in the ability. Just its name tells us nothing of what it can do. Also, the technique area is done all wrong. The best advice I can give you, is to look at the Zanpakutou of others and see how they did it. Therefore, as to give you an idea of how things are placed and so on. |
| | | Kuraiyami Hana
Posts : 8 Points : 3 Join date : 2010-04-09
| Subject: Re: Hana's Zanpakuto Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:16 pm | |
| Ok then, done. Tell me on this post if anything else needs to be changed, I cannot visit the chatbox much because it keeps makeing the page have to refresh every 2 mins or so. | |
| | | Chinou
Posts : 187 Points : 320 Join date : 2009-04-18
| Subject: Re: Hana's Zanpakuto Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:09 am | |
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| | | Megal Odon
Posts : 146 Points : 89 Join date : 2009-02-20
| Subject: Re: Hana's Zanpakuto Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:27 am | |
| Techniques: By waveing her hands around afew times depending on what she wants to sculpt from the pedals, she can make any weapon from them & use it depending on what it is. Once the weapon is made, the only way to destroy it is to have to user lose concentration on it; If this happens, the weapon will expload in black rose pedals & cut anything that is in it's way as if they were daggars. x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x Cooldown needed. | |
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