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| Hadö number 25 | |
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kurisu Kurosaki
Posts : 41 Points : 12 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 34
| Subject: Hadö number 25 Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:50 am | |
| Level: 25
Name: sombra garra
Incantation: wind tower of the south, water tower of the north, fire tower of the west and earth tower of the east give the power to the shadow. hadö number 25 sobra garra
Effect: when your opponent is a place where there is shadow, shadows will be massive and peel them like claws
size of the kido: the size of the claws are equal with a shinigami avoiding: to avoid the kido simple use light example hadö number 31 how much shadow: it dosent matter how much shadow to use but the more shadow there is the more damage it will make
Last edited by kurisu Kurosaki on Thu Apr 29, 2010 2:37 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : A major typo was found.) | |
| | | The Seed of Judas
Posts : 153 Points : 78 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 29 Location : Finland , Mikkeli.
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Tue Apr 27, 2010 7:42 am | |
| I would like more description. One sentence is not nearly enough. How big exactly are the claws, How can you avoid the Kido, How much shadow does it require? Add those and I will look at it again. | |
| | | kurisu Kurosaki
Posts : 41 Points : 12 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Wed Apr 28, 2010 4:36 am | |
| thank you very much I appreciate your help | |
| | | kurisu Kurosaki
Posts : 41 Points : 12 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Wed Apr 28, 2010 4:46 am | |
| but i will like to know if my Incantation is good enough | |
| | | The Seed of Judas
Posts : 153 Points : 78 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 29 Location : Finland , Mikkeli.
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:38 am | |
| The incantation is good I think. I have nothing against it unless it's copied from anywhere else. | |
| | | kurisu Kurosaki
Posts : 41 Points : 12 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:44 am | |
| oki | |
| | | kurisu Kurosaki
Posts : 41 Points : 12 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Thu Apr 29, 2010 8:26 am | |
| i have writing new on my kido | |
| | | Nicotsu
Posts : 5 Points : 7 Join date : 2010-02-11
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:27 pm | |
| This is denied, there needs to be alot more description. How does the Kido accomplish the peeling of enemies skin? Does the shadow take the form of claws and attempt this? What is the range and duration of the kido? because depending on that, this could very well be a level 100 kido. Saying their shinigami size is too vague, how many feet, meters, yards?
Btw, it is against the rules to double post, so this is a warning. | |
| | | Fulmine
Posts : 137 Points : 168 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 31 Location : In Mah Secret Base Watching You From A Satellite Monitor
| Subject: Re: Hadö number 25 Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:55 pm | |
| -cough- inactive user on a topic from april -end cough-
-cough- Your comment here was not necessary if you didn't get that part -end cough again- | |
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