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Mister Smiles

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PostSubject: Kyōfu o Makikomu   Kyōfu o Makikomu I_icon_minitimeFri May 07, 2010 9:49 pm

Shinigami Registration

Name: Kyōfu o Makikomu

Rank: [Whatever rank I will be given]

Age: 782

Appearance Age: 19

Appearance: [My Avatar] Also... the Shinigami uniform and a red scarf. He also has a good build and all that nonsense that really doesn't need to be included.

Gender: Male

Personality: Kyōfu has a well-rounded personality. At times that call for seriousness and times that call for cheerful optimism, he knows what to be. Although he has this well-rounded, his original personality he grew up with is that of a cheerful and relaxed attitude. Basically, he would rather rest, relax, and have fun than do battle. BUT, don't tempt him. He actually has a very... bad side. If you manage to get him pissed, he will explode and all of his power will come rushing down onto you. Which... wouldn't be good.

Division: 3 or 11?


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Hair Color: Blonde

Likes: Sake, Fun, Dancing, Women, Sky Diving, the occasional fight or two.

Dislikes: Cocky people, depressing people, annoying people, fighting with blood lust, people who don't think before they act.

Crushes: [Um, we'll find out.]


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Specialties:

Battle Specialties: Hand to Hand combat. "Ninja-Skillz"

Normal Specialties: Um, he can cook. Fast reader. Ambidextrous. Fast Learner. ETC.

History:

Kyōfu o Makikomu was born in the human world as a happy, chubby, and little baby ready to be loved by the world. His mother and father were so happy when he was born that they bought him and gave him anything he wanted. Growing up throughout all the years, he became selfish and thoughtless towards his family and friends. From all the love that his parents gave him, he thought he deserved it all the time. Not just then. For example, when he was 12 years old, his parents gave him a very large birthday party. He took his whole class and they went to an amusement park. Though, throughout all the rides, he forced everyone that came for his party behind him. He would cut through and laugh at them for not getting to do so. He felt that he had the right since it was his birthday. That made everyone very angry. They were filled with hatred for him and they only came since they would be invited to the amusement park. In frustration, all of his party members left the party... and all of them had the full agreement of their parents. Kyōfu o Makikomu... was alone.

That same day, when he was dashing through all the activities the amusement park had to offer, he found himself lost. Confused, and then angry, he screamed out, "MOM", extremely loud right in the middle of a crowd. Crying, he wiped his eyes and started to run into some direction cutting off several people. Pushing through, he screamed and screamed and screamed. Finding a huge group of people crowding around something, he squeezed his way through and gasped in surprise. There, on the ground, was his mother and father dead. Looking up, he saw a police man restraining a clown. Looking down again, he saw a gun near the clown's feet. Slowly stepping forward, he slid under a policeman's running feet and slumped downward staring at the dead bodies of his parents. As a single tear started to trickle down his cheek, this was the first time he had actually experienced true pain. Banging his hands against the ground, he balled them into fists and punched the dirt while crying like a little baby. Not only had he left them with the image of a selfish little kid, he had left them without even getting to see their smiling faces before they died. Staring up into the clouds, he grew limp and unconscious as he fainted from pure hatred and fear for the world. Before his reality grew black, he asked but one question..., "Why?"

7 years later...

As a now mature adult, Kyōfu o Makikomu had become everything his parents wanted him to be. He had gotten into a first rate college, he had a black belt in karate, and he was no longer selfish. Since his loss, he grew more... kind from knowing that the memories he made with people were important to each person. Becoming friends with the people who previously hated him, he was one of the more popular people among his age group. One day, during a science class, they were testing chemicals. Mixing them and writing out what they looked like and drawing a picture, it was normal day-to-day work for Kyōfu. Staring down at the chemicals before him, there were three test tubes. One with a greenish liquid that was exploding bubbles. One with a yellowish liquid that looked very dense. Then, lastly, the third that was a reddish liquid and looked as if it were blood. Mixing the green liquid with the yellow liquid by accident, the two chemicals mixed together and created a chemical reaction. An explosion. Having not payed attention since he was thinking of different things, the chemicals exploded on his face and he felt a burning sensation. Yet, it wasn't just a sensation... he was burning!

Running frantically around the classroom, he could hear his other peers shrieking from surprise. As they all bellowed out screams with their adrenaline pumping, Kyōfu flailed his arms as he dashed across the room and right through a window. Having been on the fourth floor, he fell to his death. Kyōfu o Makikomu would soon join his parents.

Soul Society

Waking up in Soul Society, he was filled with confusion to where he was. Then, with a slight burst of realization, he remembered a man wearing black and holding a katana shoving the end of his hilt onto his forehead speaking the following words, "You'll be going to a safe place now, my friend. It's Soul Society, and you'll like it much more than here." Rubbing his eyes, he stood up and wandered off filled with many, many questions.

Years Later

Having discovered his own power, he soon became a shinigami. His goal was purely this, he would strive to help better the world for everyone else. Unlike his young selfish personality, his new goals were not based on himself but on others instead. With his katana in his hand and the shinigami uniform he wore, he would soon rise up in the ranks and put his name in the history of the seireitei and soul society itself. This was his goal. He would accomplish it... no matter what!

Picture of Character: [Avatar]

Sample Chapter: [Shall be put up if needed.]
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PostSubject: Re: Kyōfu o Makikomu   Kyōfu o Makikomu I_icon_minitimeFri May 07, 2010 10:44 pm

Could be better but good enough approved. you may be 11th div lt if you want.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyōfu o Makikomu   Kyōfu o Makikomu I_icon_minitimeFri May 07, 2010 10:45 pm

Cool, I'll be 11th div. :3
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