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| Subject: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 5:22 pm | |
| Name: Arana (Said Aranya) Release Phrase: Kill, Arana Represent: Spider Element: Shadow/Darkness Sealed Description: In this state, Yoshimo has no changes, except for the black sword that comes out of his hollow hole. Yoshimo uses his spirit power to keep the sword in an alternate shadow dimension so he doesn't have to hear it's cries to cut as he carries it around. When Yoshimo needs to use the sword, he blocks off the back of his head so his eye appears to be complete dark instead of a hole. This is similar to a garganta being opened, but only Yoshimo has access to this. After doing that, Yoshimo will remove the sword from his eye. Usually the sword might be coated in a slimy web, or even blood from previous kills to represent it's prowess. - Spoiler:
During this stage Yoshimo is completely vulnerable to his own blood lust. Sometimes if Yoshimo is feeling weak, or isn't feeling good, his desires of blood will take over. It also happens in gory battles, the sight of blood to him becomes overwhelming and Yoshimo must satisfy his desires to kill. His shadows will turn completely crimson red, the "shadow of blood". His abilities however are not increased during this, it's just a color change to suit the mood of the battle. This can also happen in his initial release, or full released state. Also, throughout all of this, whether sealed or released, Yoshimo will still have a shadow. It's always there, and it never leaves him. The only way for his shadow to be destroyed, (no matter what the light) is for his sword to be broken. This also sounds like a rip-off of Skaeith, but every time I use a shadow type character I do the same thing.
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Initial Release: Its initial release covers his whole body in tendril like webbing. It looks like Venom's web off Spiderman 3 if that helps. These tendrils are extremely tough and stretch across his whole body. This is basically Yoshimo's shadow in its true form. The tendrils however do not cover his head, as Yoshimo keeps his head away from them so he doesn't go crazy under the influence of his sword. He can control it however, but the swords desires to cut could sometimes even mean harm to his team mates. While in this state, three black swords will float around Yoshimo and are at his control. The more shadows he absorbs the more swords/weapons he can create. (only get up to 4) Shadow in true form - Spoiler:
Shadow in its Initial Release - Spoiler:
Released Description: The full release looks like Venom off Spiderman. Yoshimo's teeth are yellow and jagged, and his tongue reaches a long length. In this state the tendrils completely take over, and Yoshimo is more stronger and faster. The swords increase to 8, that of a spiders legs. These black swords sometimes appear to have no hilt, or anything, they are all around sharp blades. In the darkness, the blades are impossible to find along with Yoshimo, but what gives him away to high ranked people is his intent to kill. Yoshimo can still manipulate his armor around him, but doing so would cause his released state to be weaker. When in this state, Yoshimo can use shadows in the area to extend the length of his sword, since Yoshimo's initial ability is the ability to create weapons with his, and surrounding shadows. Released Form *watch out for big picture* - Spoiler:
Ultimate Ability/Attack: 1. Blades of the Black Mist - Yoshimo's best offensive technique. Using his 8 swords and his massive will power to cut, Yoshimo spins the swords all around him in a ball. The swords spin extremely fast to the point that they appear to be invisible, and a black mist appears around him instead. Yoshimo cannot move very fast while doing this, and a Sonido would be out of the question for him. This attack can cut through nearly all attacks due to the speed of the blades. The swords release a high pitched frequency that appears to be a dull scream(not a sound attack). Anything within 5 meters of Yoshimo will be cut to nothing in less than a seconds time. This cant cut through others weapons, but if they attempt to block their weapon could be knocked back, leaving them open for attack. Innate Ability: Using shadows and shadows that he has connected with (tree shadow's) Yoshimo can create armor over his body that is stronger than his normal iron skin, he can also use these shadows to create black swords, which he can control with "telepathy", or hands free movement in a sense. (more in character profile)
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 5:47 pm | |
| What does your ultimate ability has to do with your family? >_> The same with your last technique. If you're going to use sound, then have the sound family. Your innate ability's approved though |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 5:52 pm | |
| . It does nothing, if I'm better off not having sound I'll remove it. I put the sound there to make it easier to dodge. |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 6:00 pm | |
| Well, you will have to make techniques that are shadow related like everyone else o_o, custom sonid/shunpo or whatever will come later..since I've suggested it before, but got denied. So you will have to come up with something else. |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 6:01 pm | |
| Alright, what if I just keep the Black blades one? |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 6:03 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 6:05 pm | |
| That'll be great. I wasn't so sure on this one, so I'll come up with more as I work with it and start RPing more.
That's going to be my only technique for now. So I'm done with this for now. |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sun May 24, 2009 6:14 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Mon May 25, 2009 6:48 pm | |
| 2. Minions - Yoshimo creates small spiders in contact of any physical type of monster, or object like earth, sand, water, any type of object like Nature or any hard surface. Nothing like wind or fire or anything along those lines. When the spiders make contact, they start to absorb the power of the element, filling themselves up with the reiatsu. (2 posts) The millions of tiny spiders usually cannot be seen well at night, and are very tiny. Once the spiders fill up, they seek the orign of the reiatsu they carry. Yoshimo can control these without moving, and usually sends them underground.
The only way for them to work is if they attach to the opponent, when the spiders are trying to make contact, the opponent will feel the presence of his own powers returning back to him/her. Since no opponent should ever feel that in a battle, (normally) that is the warning signs of the spiders attacking. The opponent has 1 post to get rid of the spiders, and getting rid of enough of them will cause the spiders to lose their sense of direction and be useless.
Since the spiders are tendrils of Yoshimo's shadow, or shadows that he can collect, they are subject to change into weapons. The spiders will give the reiatsu of the opponent back, which makes them slightly stronger, but within that, they gain the ability to seep into the opponent's circulatory system. Once inside the circulatory system, the spiders began to clump up around the aortic arch at the heart. (2 posts) The spiders all together make a ball (about the size of a large egg) in the aorta. Once that is completed, Yoshimo can change them into a tool, (spiked ball) to puncture the aorta and kill his opponent. (The aorta is a massive artery leading from the heart that carries oxygenized blood to the lower body. This artery is so big, that you could fit nearly 3 fingers down it. Since blood is leaving directly from the heart and is on a downward motion, if this were to be punctured, the opponent would bleed quickly, and die very fast from lack of blood.)
4 post cooldown
Last edited by Yoshimo Izoto on Wed May 27, 2009 7:56 pm; edited 3 times in total |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Mon May 25, 2009 6:56 pm | |
| Your element is not poisen thus, denied. |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Mon May 25, 2009 7:40 pm | |
| Truly, you could have simply said that the spiders are shadows of the opponent's reiatsu and they can turn into other, small, forms. >_> Anyway.......Approved |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Tue May 26, 2009 7:09 pm | |
| 3. Shadow of Blood - Yoshimo's attack for this is a Cero laser. It starts off on the inside of him, and Yoshimo must remain immobile for one post. (meaning he loses the ability to attack his opponent for that post since he is charging up the attack) After concentrating a huge amount of reiatsu on the outside of his mouth, Yoshimo will release all of the Cero in the next post. (After the opponents) Yoshimo uses the time charging the Cero add the opponents blood to it. *Or his own to symbolize his want of blood* This colors a deep dark red color (doesn't do anything just a pretty effect ^^). When released, this Cero could easy wipe out the regular Gran Rey Cero, and over take it. This cero is released in the form of a laser. Yoshimo can move with this technique in his mouth, but only at a speed enough that could allow him to react to an attack. 1 Laser lasts for 4 posts, with a 5 post cool down 2 lasers last for 3 posts with a 4 post cool down 3 lasers last for 2 posts with a 3 post cool down. - Spoiler:
Since a laser is a linear attack, point to point, it is easily dodged. (By high ranked ppl of course) Yoshimo can't defend while doing this, he only can attack. It seems like it's OP because the lasers last so long, but if an opponent were to Shunpo behind me to dodge the attack in the first post, I could only turn around and face the attack with my own cero in the next. Multiple attacks from different directions are this techniques MAJOR weaknesses. If I am firing a laser blast and am hit by spikes from underneath the only way to dodge would be to use the Cero and try and punch a hole through the technique.
Yoshimo can move the lasers independently from with in the cero, and bend them also. *These cannot be mirror reflected...or anything sciency like that* These lasers can cut through buildings and most tough armor. Using more lasers causes the technique to go be used up faster, (and his weaker) and allows less room for bending the cero beams. (Meaning if it isn't hit he loses that attack)The beams are blindlingly fast, but a Sonido(etc) could escape them, if timed perfectly.
Last edited by Yoshimo Izoto on Wed May 27, 2009 3:15 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Wed May 27, 2009 10:32 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Wed May 27, 2009 3:16 pm | |
| I added more description all my resurrection posts except that of the 2 technique. I didn't change that. |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Wed May 27, 2009 6:46 pm | |
| O.O Are you fucking insane >> |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Wed May 27, 2009 6:47 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Wed May 27, 2009 6:56 pm | |
| For technique two how can you destroy such small spiders? Plus killing the oppoennet >> thats ahrsh but thats approved >> However take into account that some members dont have Hearts I.E Bountos >> Plus the overall tech needs a cooldown regardless.
Tech three is approved since im the cero master i actually like that one,
For tech one: Cant cut threw others weapons, but if they attempt to block they can have their own blade knocked to the side leaving them oppen for an attack.
Bloodlust: Your sword cant be broken >>, you need to make another way for the shadows to be killed. |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Wed May 27, 2009 7:59 pm | |
| - Boshoku Akegata wrote:
- For technique two how can you destroy such small spiders? Plus killing the oppoennet >> thats ahrsh but thats approved >> However take into account that some members dont have Hearts I.E Bountos >> Plus the overall tech needs a cooldown regardless.
Tech three is approved since im the cero master i actually like that one,
For tech one: Cant cut threw others weapons, but if they attempt to block they can have their own blade knocked to the side leaving them oppen for an attack.
Bloodlust: Your sword cant be broken >>, you need to make another way for the shadows to be killed. Nothing like wind or fire or anything along those lines. These include the destructive elements like lightning and such....The only way for them to work is if they attach to the opponent, when the spiders are trying to make contact, the opponent will feel the presence of his own powers returning back to him/her. Since no opponent should ever feel that in a battle, (normally) that is the warning signs of the spiders attacking. The opponent has 1 post to get rid of the spiders, and getting rid of enough of them will cause the spiders to lose their sense of direction and be useless. That's how you get rid of the spiders...All you really have to do is get away from the feeling of your own reiatsu rushing back to you. In battle, since you're using it, you should never feel it returning to you. It's a warning sign that the spiders are coming. Also, simply brushing a good number of them off gets rid of them, because they lose their since of direction. I edited that and added a 4 post cool down... For the first tech you are right, it would make sense for it not to be able to cut through others weapons. I added that, everything you just said. I always have a shadow. It's like a Skaeith kind of thing, I've used the same thing he does at other sites. ( I know that it doesn't apply to this) Skaeith has the same thing also, so that's why I thought it would get approved...Plus, there is no way. Everything that I make is derived from my shadow. Tools, spiders, swords, all that stuff. I do that by turning a shadow (not physical) into something physical. This is my innate ability, which was approved on my template and on here by Amatsu (i think). So lets say I make some spiders. The spider attack fails, and there are little tiny useless spiders all over the place. I lose that portion of my shadow, i.e my strength, source of weapons etc. However, once my shadows are turned physical, the "light" effects do not apply. If they did, this would mean that I couldn't even use my whole resurrection under a bright light. What use would that be in battle? That's why I turn them into physical things with my innate ability. Usually, you always have a shadow, but Yoshimo always has one. This is my basis behind the argument that my shadow is always there. Also, I'm not trying to be a smart ass, I never get mad here! I'm actually trying to figure this out. I want to keep my techniques, and I want to RP here. - Spoiler:
I'm an arrancar. According to bleach, an Arrancar is a hollow that has removed its mask in order to gain Soul Reaper (Shinigami) powers. Now take my Resurrection into the picture. Even though Arrancar gain Shinigami powers, they do not gain a zanpaktou that is a representation of their owners soul, but a arrancars's zanpaktou is a resurrection of their former self, as a hollow.
So saying that my shadow could be "killed" is basically saying you can kill my previous hollow self, with pure light, or a flash light. Which would defeat the purpose of having the element in battle at all, if the shadow can't always be there. As to why Skaeith probably choose to have his shadow always there. Plus there is no way to kill a shadow....it isn't real. Remember the spiders are just tools, shaped like spiders. They are tools that fill up reiatsu of their opponent. Everything I make from my shadow is a tool, no matter how similar it is.
So actually Boshoku was right, so I removed the fact about them absorbing oxygen to tailor to his requiest. (Thanks Bosho :p, sorry for givin you hassle)
Since my true hollow form is a shadow with the innate ability to create physical weapons out of tendrils, having my shadow always be there complies with the "rules" of Bleach.
If its the spiders your concerned about, those can simply be brushed off, and it only applies to elements which aren't natrually destructive.
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sat May 30, 2009 7:23 pm | |
| Dont take what i say nad get confused simply fix what i say. However i worded myself wrong. I was saying the Shadow that turns into an ablitee can be destroyed is all. Dont over analyze makes you look stupid. Aside from that your approved |
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| Subject: Re: Yoshimo's Ressurection Sat May 30, 2009 7:35 pm | |
| Ok, thanks very much..
Sorry if it seems like I'm a smart ass, but I've been analytical like that ever since birth.
Don't mean any harm to you. |
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