Zetsumei Keiteki (Death Whistle) Done

Name: Zetsumei Keiteki (Death Whistle)

Manifestation:

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Release Phrase: Awaken Zetsumei Keiteki

Family: Kido

Level: Shinkai Level

Sealed Zanpaktou:

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Shikai:

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Shikai Ability: This sword have the ability to use Kido attacks using its own spirit energy and transferring it to very powerful blasts. It's called Zetsumei Keiteki (Death Whistle) becasuse the sword makes a low kettle whistle sound before it unleash it's powerful attacks.

Bankai Ability: N/A


Rules in making Techs:
1-99 posts: 3 techs
100-199: 4 techs
200-299: 5 techs
300-399: 6 techs.... and so on and so fourth... you can add more techs as your posts goes up.
NOTE: Put if the tech is used in shikai or bankai for the sake of orde

everything but your manisfestation rocks. Anyway approved

Techniques:

Naraku Bakuha (Hell Blast) [Shikai/Bankai]
High-pressured Kidō surges throughout the sword as it makes a low whistle sound. Red spirit energy emerges around Jojin's body before Zetsumei Keiteki fires a gigantic electricity blast of red spiritual energy resulting in an truly enormous explosion stretching miles away.
Duration: 2 Posts
Cooldown: 5 Posts

Bankai Apperance:

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Jojin's body suddenly is covered with pure flaming kido the color of blue. Also his bankai grants him wings like a dragon that is in the form of flaming blue kido. Though the blade doesn't seem cutting blue kido like essence surrounds the blade which does the slashing and thrusting.

Bankai Ability: Jojins speed and strength is incredibly increased. Also his amount of spiritual energy is increased 5x. Making the swords attacks much more powerful than it's shikai. Also the wings Jojin gains from his bankai makes a perfect defense against attacks when they wrapped his body like a blanket.


Rise Valix [Bankai]
Effect: The sword gives over a whistle similar to a train's. The whole blade suddenly burst releasing alot of spiritual energy in a fog like form. The energy then takes from of a 10 ft tall dragon made of blue energy called Valix, which is actually Zetsumei Keiteki in dragon form. The dragon makes perfect ally in battle. It has the ability to blast kido attacks from its mouth also when the attack duration is up the dragon or summoned back it explodes as a tremndous kido bomb which can destroy someone completly if not protected from it. The dragon also has the ability to swallow powerful attacks up to 89 on the kido table.
Duration: 4 Posts
Cooldown: 4 Posts

Zetsumei's Prison [Bankai]
Effect: Jojin shoots a blast from his sword similar to his Naraku blast but is in the form of a small blue ball. However if the blast come in contact of it's target or anything wield to it. [armor,weapon] The blast will burst a web made of golden energy trapping the enemy on the well like a spider's prey. The web is very powerful and can't be broken down by the use of simple kido nor can it be cut down by a slash of one's zanpakto. The web is strong enough to hold its user down for about 30 secs. [3 posts]
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 4 posts

Complete

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I would say approved and the ability and actual Bankai are approvable. The only problem that I see is that you seem to have 3 bankai techs as well as your 3 current techs. Which since you dont have 300 posts is a problem.

Oh yeah I totally forgot that rule, but I'll the fix.

Fixed

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Choose only ONE of the power's for Rise Valix.