DRAGO.... IM JUST REPOST IT.

name: yuki no nisou (Priestess of snow)

Manifestation: a young female shaman dressed in the purest white robes ever seen.

Release Phrase: Please freeze them in the distance, yuki no nisou (tooku desorerawo koora setekudasai, yuki no nisou)

Family: ice/ snow

Level: Bankai

Sealed Zanpaktou: normal katanna with an open mouth dragon hand guard, the blades is silver every thing else is blue.

Shikai: it takes the form of a blade-less sword. so in other words its just the hilt, but using ice he can create any sword thats almost as strong as a steel blade. the ice blade only last for 5 of my post. but only takes a single post to form a new one.

Shikai Ability: instantaneous water vapor freezing. turns water around me into ice. than uses the ice to play.

Bankai: When Ice's bankai is released his whole mood changes. Instead of the fun guy that every one knows him as, he turns into a serious and deadly take no prisoners fighter. His robes go from lose fitting to fighters robes, much like the ones in the link to his appearance except the robes turn dark blue. his blade takes on a more permanent form, but if it breaks in battle he is still able to make a blade using the water in the air to reform into an ice blade. just follow the link to his bankai form blade...the coloring on the blade is as followed, the black turns to dark blue to match his new robes and the silver is brightened to give it a shiny glare that can affect an opponent just like a sun lite pile of snow.
https://media.photobucket.com/image/fantasy+swords+mithrodin+sword/beeplbeep/Fantasy_Swords_Mithrodin_Sword__S_K.jpg?o=1

Bankai Ability: Ice gets the standard speed and strength boost. During his bankai release Ice is able to launch massive amounts of weak ice-based kidous at alarming rates, He can do it all day long. well actually only about 8 post in a row. with a 5 post cool down. During his bankai, Ice is able to freeze the ground he walks on and slide around the battle field like a hockey player on the ice, but in order to do so he has to release energy, how much depends how much he freezes.. However, the most important part of Ice's bankai is that five orbs made from the clearest ice float around him. The orbs are at his command, they can be used for almost anything. For defense they can come between him and his opponent and stop a blade, claw or arrow from hitting him. For offense he can have them launch at an opponent. Once they have been destroyed, they're gone for 15 post.

TECH 1- Splinter of ice (koori no hahen)- all forms- the shards fly for one of my post and one of my opponents post. Ice can use as often as he can swing the hilt.

tech 2- Blizzard (buriza^do)- shikia- He hold the hilt up to the sky and it starts a blizzard that just distracts and makes mirages come to life and allows Ice to hide among the storm like a ghost in a haunted mansion.

tech 3- Arctic slash (hokkyoku surasshu): bankai only.option 1 for use- with every slash of his sword that he puts reistu into, Ice finger is able to send out a wave of icy wind that mixes with the water in the air to create a wave of slash of ice. it stays solid until it hits any kind of obstacle. option 2 for use- he trust his sword straight forward and sends a straight beam of icy wind that mixes with the water in the air to hit an opponent in a part of the body, most commonly aimed for part is the chest. opt 1 does wide range damage which is only half as powerful as opt 2 is.

Care to make this pretty? Yeah please edit this, make it pretty. Please.

if you would, please let me know what parts arent pretty so i can fix them. oh wait thats right i was already approved for the zan. walks a way. but no im joking just let me know what you changed.

I was about to say >_>. No basically, im just wanting you to make sure that its all labeled carefully. Your thing is kind of confusing to read is all. If you could:

Get rid of.
Techniques:
Rules in making Techs:
1-99 posts: 3 techs
100-199: 4 techs
200-299: 5 techs
300-399: 6 techs.... and so on and so fourth... you can add more techs as your post goes up.

(Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning, Ice/Snow, Metal, Shadow/Dark, Light/Holy, Gravity, Illusions, Poison, Plant/Nature, Neutral,Kido, Reiatsu, Void,etc)

Get rid of one of your Techs.

ok i got rid of my fourth one.

OK i've reedited it and changed something around.

Approved unless someone else denies