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Posts : 8 Points : 5 Join date : 2010-04-20 Age : 15 Location : Anywhere and Nowhere
| Subject: Ress Sat May 15, 2010 3:24 am | |
| Name: Ress
Release Phrase: Kill these motherfuckers.
Represent: Basically it doesn't represent anything.
Element: Reiatsu
Sealed Description: A normal katana that is longer than the normal one by three inches.
Released Description: When Raven activates her ress, her mask fragment that is above her left eyebrow covers the entire body that appears to be bones.. These bones are a very tough substance that is strengthened by her reishi.. Mostly it covers her entire body, but the part of her eyes, though what is weird is that this bone armor is light as a feather for her.. At her hands, it doesn't cover her fingers.. Her helmet covers her mouth and the top of her head.. Like a cloth wrapped around her face, only her eyes are exposed which creates her weakness. Then her katana's become two, and there sheath become a bone sheath.. Her weapons appear on her back.
Ultimate Ability/Attack: This part, she can steal even more reiatsu from her opponents, then she can apply it to herself so she can be two times faster, her sonido will be 2 times faster as well.. Her strength will be multiplied by 5 times.. When she punches the ground, it shatters it many bits.. Then her reiatsu doubles as well.. She can only use this ability after 5 posts and if she's injured.. This is only used as a last resort cause it causes her to be way fatigue..
Innate Ability: She is able to steal away a portion of her enemies reiatsu once at the beginning then again at the 10th turn.. Since that is very weak, her true ability is because her bone armor is strengthened by reiatsu, she can manipulate her bone armor.. For example, grow a weapon out of bones.. Because of this ability, she can shoot a bone spike from any part of her body.. Thousands actually.. She has an unlimited supply of these... Then she is able to form wings made out of bones on her back, since they are made out of bones, they mostly cannot work without reiatsu.. So, she sends reiatsu there so that she can use it properly.. | |
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Posts : 63 Points : 4 Join date : 2010-05-07 Location : The Abyss. It's very Lonely.
| Subject: Re: Ress Sat May 15, 2010 8:52 am | |
| Could you take out the profanity and replace it with something else for you release phrase. Could you please find a suitable representation. For your ultimate Ability, how do you steal reiatsu from your opponents? I think you should lower on how much strength you gain. It should probably depend on how much reiatsu you even manage to steal from your opponent. When you punch the ground, what shatters in many bits? and how does it give you more reiatsu. If you have such a great ability, you should lengthen the time of your cooldown for your ultimate ability. For your innate ability, you can only have one. I don't care if it's "weak". How do you steal the reiatsu? and for the later, how long do these transformations last in the bone armor? Does it weaken any parts of it when you create something new? You shouldn't be able to have an unlimited supply of bone spikes since it's made from just your armor. How do you actually transform your bone armor? Does it just happen? or does it take awhile to fully transform with each transformation according to the size and etc. Oh, and your res's name, is it actually just "Ress"? I'm not going to make you change it, but you could be a little more original. No offense.
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