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PostSubject: nathan   nathan I_icon_minitimeWed May 06, 2009 3:31 pm

Name: lightfoot, nathan

Age: 1690

Visual age: 22

Ex-Division: squad 12

Appearance: follow the link... http://www.fightersgeneration.com/characters3/ryo-ngbc.jpg

Personality: totally a laid back guy. if he doesnt have to do anything than he wont. during combat he really likes to get carried away. when he starts to mess up in the battle he tends to beat himself up, even for small mistakes. really energenic. likes to party.

Background/History: during his life, he was a student at college, not the brightest but he still was a model student. he worked out of his fathers construction company. during a routine fix up of a diasaster zone, he was moving a load with a machine and one of the cables snapped tossing him and the machine every where. after blacking out and staying in the machine for almost an hour, he woke up. his father was over him and helped him ot his feet. after that he noticed one of the other workers had a chain in them and was screaming but no one around could hear of even see him but him. as he watched him turn into a hallow, a reaper appeared and during the fight a building was hit and hit hard. as the building was falling he pushed his father away from it and killed by it.

after death... he spent his first 150 years in the rukon district and after a while he just wandered around until one day he hit the south wall of the seiritia, no you didnt read that wrong he actually hit it after a party. after that soul reapers became awary of his hidden power. so he was forced into the acdemy and was usually found in the library, he was addicted to the books and the knowledge that was trapped in them. he read almost everything until one day he was told to visit the squad 12 labs. he was drafted. during his visit he was introduced to a few not so dangerous test. one day Aizen was there over seeing a new test. he called him in and bombarded him with new kinds of energys and slowly nathan was passing out and than waking up in a mediationial trances fighting battles with a mysterous hallow that just wouldnt die entirely. after a while nathan became awrary of what was happening to him, it was written in one of the books he had read. he was fighting his inner hallow. after days of fighting he woke up with a mask on, than it slowly dissolved. after that, aizen opened up a portal and as he throw me into it he managed an evil smile and laugh. knowing what aizen had just turned nathan into was just the horrifing start.


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PostSubject: Re: nathan   nathan I_icon_minitimeWed May 06, 2009 4:17 pm

Your character will have to be much much much older if you want to connect it to Aizen, since this forum is set at least 1200 years after Aizen's death.

Also just a hint, when writing try not to switch from 1st person to 3rd person and back again, it becomes slightly confusing.
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PostSubject: Re: nathan   nathan I_icon_minitimeWed May 06, 2009 5:21 pm

sorry i went from writing an english asignment to this, my mind is a little foggy, and yea ok... i can fix the age.
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PostSubject: Re: nathan   nathan I_icon_minitimeWed May 06, 2009 5:31 pm

Approved.
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