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Rayne Itetzu

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PostSubject: Rayne Itetzu's Vizard app.   Rayne Itetzu's Vizard app. I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 26, 2010 3:26 pm

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Name: Rayne Itetzu

Ex- Division: 6th

Appearance: He posseses quite a tall frame with an athletic build. Although not particualrly muscular his physique does hide a suprising level of strength he has soft hazel brown eyes and a lightly tanned complexion his hair is usually kept relatively short and spiked although at one point he did have long tangled dreadlocks which he kept neatly behind him tied up, he can usually be seen wearing his shinigami uniform but when he was alive back in the material world he was partial to wearing darker colours with outfits comprised of jeans, a shirt or other short sleeved top and usually a hooded jacket over the top.

Age: [/b 361 but by looks has the appearance of an 18 year old.

[b]Gender: Male

Personality: Rayne is a moderately quite guy he strives to achieve but only because he likes having the ability to overcome the challenges that are thrown his way, with no real passion or aim he's usually very laid back. Faliure hits him hard he dosn't like to lose at things (who does i suppose) but when he does he'll run the scenario around his head over and over till he can anylyse his mistakes and work out a way around them next time. he enjoys the company of others feeling the most comfortable in a humoured atmosphere, but in battle he has no time for jokes, althought usually laid back when challenged he will always try to defeat his enemy quickly and efficiently having no time for those who oppose him. on saying that he's not the kind of guy with an overbearing mindset (get in my way your dead) he enjoys the occasional friendly challenge or even a light rivalry but those who oppose him in an aggressive manner must always be dealt with without mercy.

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Hair Color: Black

Likes: Sushi, noodle based foods, reading, material world technologies, and films from the real world

Dislikes: hyperactivity, overemotionalness, loud distractions whilst trying to concentrate and those who are intentionally cruel to people who are unable to do anything about it.

Crushes: He is only just becoming interested in females as he was always too busy back in the real world with school work, but in the endless time provided by the after life he is able to persue other interests.

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Specialties: Rayne is a very good cook and is also a skilled poet. a

History: Raynelived a preety complacent life, he went to school in tokyo which is where he was born, his mother and father were scientists working for a large pharmaceutical company they had been transferred from england to Tokyo to be closer to a project they were working on, they had varied hours so much of his time was spent alone or when he was younger with his nanny Li song, she was very close too him. In his younger years he had taken alot of abuse at school for being so quite and reading much of the time, but no matter how hard it got she'd always managed to nurse him through it and keep him cheerful. when he was 10 she was mugged returning home after grocery shopping unfortunately even after handing over her valuables the mugger had wanted more, making moves toward raping her she had not been a very strong woman but she did have her pride and refused him in his efforts resulting in her murder. this news crushed Rayne pushing him into a deep depression, he refused to eat or drink, didnt talk to anyone and wouldn't even leave his bed for the first week, but he overcame it through remembering the way Li song had treated him and made him feel, memories of her gave him strength and from then on he always lived for optimism enjoying humour and became more sociable. His parents didnt replace the nanny deeming him old enough to look after himself at his age so from there on he became much more independant organising his affairs and cooking for him and his smaller sister Jade who was nearly 4 years younger than him and he was very protective of her. They shared a strong bond, each day after dinner they would spend at least an hour or two in each others company like clockwork partaking in varied activities. Time passed and Rayne moved further through education his life uneventful and monotonous, he enjoyed spending time with his friends during school hours but didnt go out that much out side of school due to feeling he had to take care of Jade. Other than his sister, chores and his studies he found himself with little else to do. It was at age 17 that he died, he was coming home from college, stood on the escalator moving towards the platform to get the train home, the same train he'd caught everyday for the past two years. There was a commotion behind him at the top of the escalator a man had jumped over the barriers in the hopes of avoiding purchase of a ticket and was now running toward the escalator trying to avoid the guard. He reached the top of the motorised staircase shoving the patrons of the subway from his path knocking people in every direction before reaching Jin, at this point the guards had closed in and the mans frenzied panic became intensified he pushed past Rayne with an over aggressive motion that sent Rayne tumbling down the metal steps sounds of ligaments tearing and bones splintering filled the subway to the horrified gasps of onlookers. The corpse finally came to a standstill at the base of the escalator the limp broken limbs lay crumpled in horrifically unnatutal angles strewn with blood from the sickening hollow now apparent on Rayne’s cracked skull.

It was on that day that Rayne entered Rukongai he was at a loss as to his environment unable to fathom what possible realm this could be as he'd had no believe in life after death as a living man. the villagers of rukongai clearly used to this reaction from new residents quickly welcomed Rayne explaining to him his new home. he settled in quickly happy to do the mundane chores that the villagers asked of him in return for food and shelter until he saw it, a shinigami walking by in the streets of rukongai, the illuminating authority of his strides inspired Jin, the way this mans mere presence was able to push the air from his lungs called to him, Rayneknew his newest goal it was to become one of them..........A shinigami. it was shortly after this that he joined the shinigami academy the beggining of his new life as a soul.

Picture of Character: [img]Rayne Itetzu's Vizard app. Jinavi11[/img]

Sample Chapter: Another day, another chore. Once again Jin had been assigned the job of patrolling Rukongai a moderately uneventful practice that left him free to watch the happy villager go about they’re daily routines. These slums were a poverty stricken place only two sectors in from the poorest outskirts, they were home to crime and disease backwater alleys filled with scum and death. Nothing seemed to prosper here the residents usually either ending up dead or on the short path through a career in crime, but that was the life of Rukongai and no matter how hard it got the peasants lived it with a smile. That was something that had always impressed Rayne when he’d lived here the way that they managed to pull through the gruelling struggle that formed the everyday life on these streets without ever becoming depressed, a few steps in any direction and it wasn’t long before you’d hear the beginning note’s of some cheery shanty as the civilians sang they’re work away.

As bountiful a feeding ground as soul society was it was rare for it to experience the visiting of hollow. Filled with unarmed souls just ripe for the plucking but guarded by the Gotei 13 it proved an impressive deterrent to the demonic predators, upon saying that it wasn’t like there were never any hollow, there were always the odd few around the more hot-headed of the hollow population, breaking through to prove they’re worth and feed they’re lust for power but on the most part they stuck to the material world less abundant but also the less dangerous of the two or feeding on they’re brethren in the desert’s of Hueco Mundo.

As Rayne walked the dusty street’s from the corner of his eye he noted a stream of people panic stricken and running out the entrance to one of Rukongai’s many back alley’s he smiled at the clear sign of trouble, a signal that his day wasn’t too be as boring as he’d first expected. As much as he hated the work of patrol it was even worse when all he had for entertainment was the sound of the idle chatter of the villagers.

Within a second he reached the source of the trouble using Hohou to stand above the alley. As he gazed down he saw what had instigated the panic the small sleek frame of a hollow lay beneath him feeding on the soul it had recently ensnared. The thin aerodynamic frame of a cheetah or some member of that big cat family, with a mask to match. The demon sniffed the air, sensing the new comer’s reiatsu it turned and fled running the backwater ally’s with uncanny speed. Rayne wouldn’t permit that, a beast like this running the street’s of Rukongai was just too much of a threat it had too be stopped. He took off after it the wind whipping past his face as he deftly flash stepped through the tight confines, swiftly eluding the approaching turns never once missing a step his agility always compensating for him. The blurred surrounding flashed by just intertwining blocks of colour melding from one to the next as his focus stayed locked on his prey never letting the sprinting figure leave his line of vision.

His breathing was ragged and staggered the air passing him by so quickly he was having a hard time inhaling it, the aroma’s of his surrounding never able to grasp his nostril’s leaving him void of smell nothing concerning him other than his thought’s of catching his prey, he began pouring more Reiatsu to his lower limbs increasing further his speed, his moments nothing but a blur to passers by, slowly gaining on the creature, it had to be at least Adjuchas class to be keeping ahead of him at this speed, the distance between then becoming neither shortened nor stretched they were matched foot fall for foot fall. Rayne pounded through the air his powerful movement ripping at his muscles, he wasn’t yet used to travelling at these speed’s yet and it was definitely taking its toll his leg’s becoming less and less responsive to his commands at the gap between the two un-sightable figures began to close. He was doing it finally closing in upon his victim, he knew what he had to do…..but could he manage it, so far he kept all his focus in maintaining his speed was it even possible to perform a kidou simultaneously? Well he was about too find out.

“Hadou Number 23: 36 Pound cannon”

The incantation ripping through his throat as a rasp his voice box left as nothing more than a dried hunk of flesh from the harsh currents he had forcibly inhaled down his throat. The condensed blade of wind shot from his hand slicing through the fleeing hollow cleaving it in two, Rayne skidded too a halt able to do nothing more than pant trying to revive his oxygen deprived organs. As the hollow scattered to the wind, nothing left but it decomposing carcass Rayner released his Hohou dropping to the floor, as he moved to walk away from the scene wanting to find a bench to rest his weary muscles he saw something flutter in the wind. It was a seal, half attached to the back of the rapidly disintegrating hollow’s head, and what was more Rayne ecognised the symbol it was a control seal………..someone had been puppeteering this hollow.

“Ahh shit” he sighed under the realisation that he’d just managed to stumble upon even more work.



OOC: sorry somehow i lost the bold marks in the transferral but i can re-insert them if you like
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