Darga's Zanpakuto

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Name: Hari odori (meaning Glass dance)

Manifestation:

Spoiler:

Release Phrase:Shatter

Family:Glass

Level: shikai

Sealed Zanpaktou: Darga's Zanpakuto B000S7AOQK

Shikai:

Shikai Ability:the abilitie to turn almost any earthly subtance to glass such and dirt or wood

Shikai Special Ability:

Glass Dance: This attck is very distructive and can kill Darga slams his zanpakuto into the ground causing a 10 long trail of glass pillars that are 5 feet in hight and very skinny like about the width of a drinking straw that can pirce bone and of course flesh these pillars are very easy to dodge but are very dangerous cool down 3 turn

Glass Towers; this attack is deadly to even the user becase they must slam their zanpakuto into the ground to summon three large pillars of pure glass that are atleast 30 feet tall but they worst part is that when the user says his release phrase with in this case is shatter the pillars explode sending shockwaves of spiked glass everywhere almost undodgeable witch can kill in many cases or badly injuer anyone caught in the blast cool down 4 turns

Glass barrage: this is his shikais best attack when he says his release phrase Shatter his zanpakuto's best tech is that to summon a group of two glss wolves the will charge at his opponet and will self destrcut if contact with the target or if the get within 2 feet of their target withch will send large blades of glass into their opponets body killing them or pushing them to a point of near death if the attak makes full on contact six turns

1-99 posts: 3 techs

Guest

Your ability needs to state how many bursts of lightning it shoots out, How many posts someone may be stunned for.

Your techniques need to be SEPERATE not jumbled into one chunky paragraph. If you need an example look at one of the approved registrations. Also, your first two techs need to state how large these waves are, and how long your opponent in blinded.

Guest

Approved

Guest

Rose, aren't you forgetting to look for cooldowns? o.o

Guest

Quote :: attacks:lightning assault this lets me slam the blade into the ground causing a large burst of lighting about five feet tall four feet wide

There really isnt a point for a cooldown for this tech, seeing as it can be dodged or blocked quite easily. Also, anyone with common sense will know he cant fire too many of these.

Quote :: wrath of the thunder god this lets me send a large shockwave of lightning at opponet that is 6 ft tall and 3 ft wide

Again, not much point in having a cooldown, since its more or less like a hollow and cero. Fire away, but without strategy, there is no way he'll land a hit.

Guest

You still need cooldowns and post durations on the techs.

Guest

Cool down for the first tech is upped to 3 posts

Cool down for the second is upped to 4 posts

I am assuming the last tech is a once per battle as you stated it is only active for 6 posts.

So Approved If the changes detailed are made.

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