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PostSubject: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 25, 2009 2:52 am

Name: Tomoshibi

Manifestation:
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Release Phrase: Shine, Tomoshibi

Family: Light

Sealed Zanpaktou:
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Level: Shikai

Shikai: When released Kageryus zanpaktou shrinks down to 6 feet long from it's usual form of 6 1/2 feet long but grows out to 1 foot wide as opposed to its usal width of just a few inches so basically it just looks like a 6 foot long 1 foot wide rectangle on the end of a hilt, but here's the kicker. It's made of solid light (Think Seele Schnieder except yellow and much bigger)

Shikai Ability: Being made of solid light, Kageryu can bend it's shape to become any weapon he wants but he only has so much light to work with so what he can do is limited, say if he stretches it then the blade would get thinner until it was as thin as a pin but 20 feet long.

Techniques:
Ranpu Kire/Light Slash: Kageryu fires a slash made of concentrated light at his opponent which then returns to him immediately after contact (not nesecarily with opponent) can take an extra post to increase speed or power but adds an extra post to the cool down CD/3 posts 4 if charged.

Disukonekuto/Disconnect: By pulling an a metal ring attached to the guard of his blade, the light disconnects from the hilt of the zanpaktou and Kageryu can now guide it freely in the air CD/10 Duration/5

Tomoshibi no Triiku/A trick of the light: Kageryu can make a part of his sword turn from solid light to to the reglar form of light and it will pass through other solid objects and resloidify almost instantly CD/7


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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 25, 2009 7:28 am

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 28, 2009 3:45 am

i meant to add my3rd technique a while ago so i just put it on now
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 06, 2009 2:08 am

I remade my zanpaktou. Need re-approval
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 06, 2009 2:39 am

approved >>
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 13, 2009 2:44 am

needs Re-approval again.
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 13, 2009 3:06 am

Id rape your manisfestation, however your Approved Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 21, 2009 2:44 am

Bankai: Asahi Uxingusu Ryuu
Think inner hollow Ichigos bankai sword but instead of the swastika this guard and hilt
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Bankai Ability: In this form Kageryu grows wings and 3 tails all made out of the same light reiatsu as his shikai all and all techs for shikai apply to his bankai as well

(I may improve this as time goes on, but this is it for now)

Bankai tech
Uxingusu Kizoku Ryuu
Kageryus wings fold around him making a shield that blocks all attacks below Kageryus level CD/7


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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 21, 2009 6:01 am

Bankai itself is approved but the tech seems a bit to much to me, i mean all attacks below your level, seems a bit ott along with the healing porsen added to it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 21, 2009 6:03 am

took out the healing
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 21, 2009 6:05 am

approved unless another admin sees a fult with it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 29, 2009 2:19 am

Name: Tomoshibi

Manifestation:
Spoiler:

Release Phrase: Shine, Tomoshibi

Family: Light/Reiatsu

Level: Bankai

Sealed Zanpaktou: A 6ft masasume sword
Spoiler:
with this guard and this colour blade
Spoiler:

Shikai: When released Kageryus zanpaktou shrinks down to 6 feet long from it's usual form of 6 1/2 feet long but grows out to 1 foot wide as opposed to its usal width of just a few inches so basically it just looks like a 6 foot long 1 foot wide rectangle on the end of a hilt, but here's the kicker. It's made of solid light (Think Seele Schnieder except yellow and much bigger)

Shikai Ability: Being made of solid light, Kageryu can bend it's shape to become any weapon he wants but he only has so much light to work with so what he can do is limited, say if he stretches it then the blade would get thinner until it was as thin as a pin but 20 feet long.

Bankai: Assarishita Hyoumenka Ryuu
Spoiler:
but instead of the blades it's made of the light reiatsu used in his shikai, also when in bankai Kageryu grows wings (With an approximate length of 4 metres) and 3 tails each 2 metres long

Bankai Ability: Kageryu can manipulate the form of his bankai in the same way that he could manipulate his zanpaktou in shikai, in this form Kageryu become's 3 times stronger physically by coating what ever he wants to enhance in the light, and can move faster but only when in the air and only if he isn't using the wing's for anything else

Techniques: (Must have this template for all new Tech's)
Shikai/Bankai
Name:Ranpu Kire/Light Slash
Effect:Kageryu fires a slash made of concentrated light at his opponent which then returns to him immediately after contact (not nesecarily with opponent) can take an extra post to increase speed or power but adds an extra post to the cool down.
Duration and or Cooldown: CD/3 posts 4 if charged

Shikai/Bankai
Name:Disukonekuto/Disconnect
Effect: By pulling an a metal ring attached to the guard of his blade, the light disconnects from the hilt of the zanpaktou and Kageryu can now guide it freely in the air
Duration and or Cooldown: CD/10 Duration/5

Shikai/Bankai
Name: Tomoshibi no Triiku/A trick of the light
Effect: Kageryu can make a part of his sword turn from solid light to to the reglar form of light and it will pass through other solid objects and resloidify almost instantly
Duration and or Cooldown: CD/7 Duration/5

Bankai only
Name: Gyaza Tomoshibi
Effect: Draws light in from the nearest source combines it with reiatsu and adds to his total of light doubling his wing span and number of tails in bankai
Duration and or Cooldown: Duration/6 CD/10

I figured that I would remake my zanpaktou a little, made a few things more specific with the Shikai, completly remade the Bankai
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 29, 2009 2:36 am

Before I even look at this, I hope you know that anything you used in the past cannot be edited. Once you post here saying that nothing you have used is being changed, I will look over this.
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PostSubject: Re: Kageryus Zanpaktou   Kageryus Zanpaktou I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 29, 2009 2:39 am

The only technique I have used so far is Ranpu Kire and didn't change that at all
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