Oto's ZANPAKTOU

Name: (Zakurai)

Release Phrase: (RAI)

Family: Death

Level: (unknown)

Sealed Zanpaktou: ()

Shikai: ( the sword)

Shikai Ability: (This sword can fly on its own and have a mind of its own to kill the enemy this can be used every other turn)

Bankai: ()

Bankai Ability:(The Zanpaktou shoots out sound waves at Oto's control )

Techniques:
1. unseen death
This ability allows Otoshakis sword to break in to smaller pieces they circle around the opponent then they get faster and eventually turn in to a black ball around the enemy blinding them so all they see is black for 5 posts. This cam be used 2 a topic

2. Mind clawer
This ability is used when Otoshaki throws his sword up in the air and then the sword turns in the air then flys down at the opponent at almost the speed of sound. This can be used once every 5 posts

Denied.

Your shikai abilty is a godmod.

ok there

the shikai is still god modded

Fixed

YOUR SHIKAI IS STILL GODMOD! It's also auto-hitting and shit and that's just not fair..it'll make people sad... fix it again.

THERE

Your shikai ability is ok but that takes reiatsu and would need a usage limit and cooldown as do all your tehniques.

there

fixed

Quote :

1. unseen death
This ability allows Otoshakis sword to break in to smaller pieces they circle around the opponent then they get faster and eventually turn in to a black ball around the enemy blinding them so all they see is black for the rest of the battle. This cam be used 1 a topic

This is denied because its sovague and nothing can last the entire fight.

Quote :

3. break dance
Otoshakis sword flys at the enemy as if it had a mind of its own and it attacks the opponent no matter what and it cuts all of there limbs 3 tumes then flys back at Otoshaki and sticks in the ground. This can be used once every 10 posts

This tech is worded in a godmod way. "it attacks the opponent no matter what", so does that mean they cant defend or dogde?

no it just means that it will keep attacking the opponent

unseen death
This ability allows Otoshakis sword to break in to smaller pieces they circle around the opponent then they get faster and eventually turn in to a black ball around the enemy blinding them so all they see is black for 5 posts in there battle. This can be used 1 a topic

fixed

DENIED.

Due to the simply fact that none of your techniques are remotely related to the holy family.

forgot to fix that brb

fixed

Your first technique can't be for the rest of the battle, otherwise it would drain your strength considerably. Your third technique has an auto hit in it, fix it.

OK DONE

well?

Stop double posting. And you still have the auto hit in your third technique. Take that out and it's approved

ok done

approved