Kumori Kai's Zanpaktou

Name: Kumori

Manifestation:

Release Phrase: Fade Kumori Katsujinken (Cloudy Humanity Divided)

Family: Void

Level: Shikai lvl

Sealed Zanpaktou:

Shikai:

Shikai Ability: Kumori has the ability to make interdementional rips in the universe. This ability allows him to travel from one place to another in a blink of an eye. Thanks to this ability Kai was able to create a tech. based on his foundings. Kai will travel from one void to another making it seem like he is every where. It is best used to create a distraction or easily hurt his foe.

Bankai: N/A

Bankai Ability: N/A

Techniques:

Name: Distoration

Effect: Distoration is the ability to coruppt the enemys vison with quick void transfers. Instead of seeing one Kai the enemy will se multiple Kais. With the enemy in a daze kai will attempt tomake a surprise attack.

Duration and or cooldown: 2 post, 2 post

Name: Void Whirlpool

Effect: Void Whirlpool creates a blistering whirlpool that sucks up any thing in a near by 13ft radius. This move is great for easy escapes and deflecting attacks. The may also be used to suck up multiple enemys. When inside they are transported in another locatin away from Kai.

Duration and or cooldown: 3 post, 4 post

Name: Dragon's Void

Effect: This move is a kido attack combined with Kumori's speacial ability. The user will create a Hadou kido and throw his zanpaktou into the crossfire. Kumori will then release energy to turn the form of the kido in to a dragon like substance. Kumori will then create a base void inside the kido, so that when it open its mouth the foe will by sucked up with any other matter for a 1 post time period.
The Kido is need for two things a carrier, and a plan b. if the foe isn't suked up the kido will still keep moving with greater force to attack the foe. After this move is done Kumori will go back to its sealed form. Either uses Hadou 4 or Hadou 31

Durationand or cooldown: 2 post, 10 post

First and foremost; Your Shikai may have one ability. You have two. Pick one.

Secondly, you cannot say "Distortion corrupts the enemy's mind". That is controlling your enemy's character, as not all enemies will become dazed simply for seeing more than one of you.

Thirdly, add some elaboration to Void Whirlpool. Explain what happens to them if they are sucked in.

And, finally, your final technique has no relation whatsoever to the family you have chosen. As such, I must deny this technique.

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Aside from your second technique, your others don't need durations. As they are used in a post, and end in that post.

Now..

Raise the cooldown of your first technique to two. One seems to be too rapid. Also, as I said in my above post, not all enemies will react the same way, so be aware of that.

Your second technique is godmodding.. If they're sucked into the void they die? No. Fix it.
Your third technique... I worded a little oddly, but otherwise okay. But clarify whether it has to be used with one specific kido or any kidou. Also specify if the kidou has to be Bakudou or Hadou.

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